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新東方在線 [ ] 網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂電子教材系列 雅思寫作 G 類 1 雅思寫作 G 類作文 講義 隨筆分類: 雅思寫作互動及欣賞區(qū) 新聞“報”料 雅友大聯(lián)盟 必下載文件: 小新課堂 筆記 version 雅思回家復(fù)習(xí)計劃 插入雅思寫作答題紙 Task 1 (G) ? Types of Letter 1. Complaint 2. Enquiry 3. Request 4. Apology 5. Acknowledgement 6. Suggestion 7. Job application 8. Remendation 9. Selfintroduction 10. Invitation Tactics for Task 1 (General Training) Structure Dear Sir or Madam, —— unknown authority/stranger Dear Mr. /Ms./Prof/Dr (Surname), —— known authority Dear (name), —— friend/relative Re: (position)—— only for application letter As one of your (identity) s, I am writing this letter to express my (emotion) ——formal I am (name) , writing to you for (purpose) —— informal Question 1amp。2—— explanation of the whole event and expression of some emotion Question 3—— offer your own solution 新東方在線 [ ] 網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂電子教材系列 雅思寫作 G 類 2 Looking forward to your early reply and thanks for your great effort to deal with it. Yours sincerely (English name) Emotion Words Complain Request Thanks Apology Invitation App/Re Junk Words disfort concern thanks regret invitation confidence dissatisfaction confusion appreciation sorrow disturbance interest thankfulness grief annoyance enquiry irritation Medium Words uneasiness perplexity remorse request selfassurance disposure bewilderment repentance boldness Favorable words disconcertion solicitude chagrin proposition aplomb perturbation bafflement contrition solicitation poise vexation punction lamentation ? Complaint –說明意圖 +解釋 情況 +解決方案 例: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Acmodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. 1. I am writing to plain about…/that… 2. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something 3. I am most reluctant to plain, but… 4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a plaint about… Examples: I am writing to plain about the service on the BeijingShanghai train which I took on August 16, 2020. 新東方在線 [ ] 網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂電子教材系列 雅思寫作 G 類 3 I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the Walkman I bought at the dutyfree shop in your airport on February 14, 2020. ? End of a plaint letter 1. I would be grateful / I shall appreciate it very much if you could take the matter into consideration and solve it at your earliest convenience. 2. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of… / within 14 days. Writing task 1 You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Acmodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient. I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him。 for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments. I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible. Yours sincerely, Janice Kennedy 考生樣卷: Dear Sir, Dear Madam, I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request to another acmodation next term. My main problem is that I cannot study in my room because my roommate always has friends visiting. He also has parties, which usually ends early in the morning, several times a week. Further more he often borrows my things without asking me. I cannot accept this situation any longer. Especially because I have very important exams next term and I really must study hard. This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next term. It would be most convenient for me not having to share my room with someone 新東方在線 [ ] 網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂電子教材系列 雅思寫作 G 類 4 else. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully Dee White 考官評分: 分 修正版: Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request alternate acmodation starting next term. The main problem is that I find it extremely difficult to study in my room because my roommate constantly has friends visiting and throw loud parties which often last until early morning. This does not just happen once or twice a month. He has these parties several times a week, ever since the beginning of the term. In addition, my roommate often borrows my things without asking me. Even after numerous polite requests, there has been no change in my roommate’s behaviour. It has now gotten to the point that we don’t even talk to each other. This has added a lot of undue stress, which has started to take its toll on my studies. Because I hav