【正文】 【英語(yǔ)】九年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練100(附答案)及解析一、中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編1．（天津中考模擬）近日中央電視臺(tái)報(bào)道了一個(gè)十四歲小男孩何思汗的事跡，介紹了他賣畫籌款醫(yī)治姑姑的感人故事。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文。（1）何思汗從小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼對(duì)繪畫有很大興趣。（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日漸貧寒。（3）他作畫籌款給姑姑治病。（4）思汗勇于面對(duì)困難、主動(dòng)承擔(dān)家務(wù)且刻苦學(xué)習(xí)。（5）你的想法……參考詞匯：嚴(yán)重的serious 疾病disease要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Moving Story of He SihanRecently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He________________【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You can’t imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he offers to do all the housework. What’s more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.I feel proud of him. Because he never gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，介紹何思汗的感人事跡。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比較級(jí)and比較級(jí), raise money, give up, in addition, offer to do, what’s more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try one’s best等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。2．（廣州市天河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。提示：1. 出行方式2. 不浪費(fèi)紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）4. 低碳生活的作用注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3．文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名等相關(guān)信息。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。t need them. What39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢保约澳銓?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱主要為第一人稱。認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示要點(diǎn)，確定主題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。節(jié)約我們周圍所有的能源是一種習(xí)慣。保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境很重要。首先，我總是步行去上學(xué)，告訴父母步行去上班，而不要開車。其次，當(dāng)我不需要的時(shí)候，我會(huì)及時(shí)關(guān)掉水龍頭、風(fēng)扇、電視機(jī)和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。更重要的是，我們家里的水一直都在重復(fù)利用。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。我認(rèn)為充分利用紙張是件好事。通過(guò)這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹木。最后，我會(huì)帶著籃子購(gòu)物而不使用塑料袋。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會(huì)越來(lái)越好。低碳，快樂生活。我們采取行動(dòng)吧?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。3．（北京中考模擬）從下面兩個(gè)題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。題目①假如你是李華，明天下午2:00你要去參加“傳統(tǒng)文化才藝展示”活動(dòng)，因此不能上英語(yǔ)課。請(qǐng)用英文給你們的外教John寫一張請(qǐng)假條，告訴他你要去干什么，為什么要參加這個(gè)活動(dòng)以及你保證按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。提示詞語(yǔ):traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help提示問(wèn)題:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?Why will you take this activity?How will you finish your homework?Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence from your English ______________________________________________________________Your loring student Li lHua題目②一位好老師，勝過(guò)萬(wàn)卷書。在你的初中生活中，一定會(huì)有一位老師給你留下了深刻印象。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Thank you, my teacher”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，讓更多的人認(rèn)識(shí)你的老師，同時(shí)表達(dá)你對(duì)他/她的感激之情。主要內(nèi)容包括: 哪位老師給你留下了深刻印象，發(fā)生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想對(duì)他/她說(shuō)些什么。提示詞語(yǔ)：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress提示問(wèn)題：Which teacher impressed you most?What happened to make you impressed?What do you want to say to him/her?Thank you,my teacher____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】題目一：Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I39。m going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.Your loring student Li Hua題目二：Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.I really want to sayThank you for helping me. I love you! to my English teacher.【解析】【詳解】、題目①本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，作文要求寫一張請(qǐng)假條，因此格式要遵循假條的格式。假條的內(nèi)容——時(shí)間和事由均給出，結(jié)合提示問(wèn)題可知假條主要從三個(gè)方面寫，這三個(gè)方面