【正文】 （英語）英語英語書面表達(dá)匯編提高訓(xùn)練及解析一、中考英語書面表達(dá)匯編1．（上海中考模擬）In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.（以“我和……” 為題，寫一篇60120 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。） 每一個(gè)生命個(gè)體都和這個(gè)世界發(fā)生著聯(lián)系，你也不例外。請分享一個(gè)你和他人、社會或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）【答案】My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。2．（河北育華中學(xué)中考模擬）你有沒有因?yàn)闆]能好好管理時(shí)間而影響了學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷?請你寫一篇文章談?wù)勥@件事及你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：（事情，原因及后果）；。作文要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。、校名和地名。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Once, I couldn39。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my 【答案】Once, I couldn39。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of puter game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset. How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Jim taught me how to play a kind of puter think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3．（廣東中考模擬）假如你是班長李華，今天你們班對即將到來的暑假計(jì)劃進(jìn)行了討論。你們班的外教David對此很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下信息，給 David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他討論的情況及你自己本人的計(jì)劃及原因。比例計(jì)劃原因50% 去國內(nèi)外旅游。30% 多讀一些書；20% 參加社會實(shí)踐。你的計(jì)劃? （至少一個(gè)）？（請你補(bǔ)充）注意：（1）郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)（2）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；（3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評分注：社會實(shí)踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI39。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI39。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4．（江蘇中考模擬）三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，你一定對初中生活留下了很多美好的回憶。下周五你班要召開畢業(yè)班會，請根據(jù)下面的英文提示，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以“I remember ”為題，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，分享你校園生活中的一次活動或經(jīng)歷。要點(diǎn)如下：1. What’s the event? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. How did you feel at that moment?4. How has the event changed your life? 注意：，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。I remember How time flies! My junior school life is ing to an end. 【答案】I rememberHow time flies, my junior school life is ing to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale. When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and