【正文】 。句子和句子之間、段落和段落之間缺乏連貫性。：用英文組織篇章的能力較差，半天寫不出一句話，大有抓破頭皮摳一句話之勢。總結(jié)來說，根據(jù)以上分析的問題所在，大致可以做出以下對策：：，細(xì)致的分析各種語法現(xiàn)象，把自己弄不懂的單獨勾畫出來，通過查資料和請教老師等手段一直到弄懂為止。，并分析歷年的三、四級考試題型中出現(xiàn)的常用詞匯和表達(dá)，堅持記憶和聽寫。并注意分析詞匯規(guī)律，找到最合適的記憶方法。，并且背誦10篇左右自己喜歡的文章，積累各種句式和表達(dá)。：，確定所寫的體裁是議論文、記敘文或是應(yīng)用文等。并且對所給的outline部分一定要仔細(xì)閱讀，并融入到自己的寫作當(dāng)中。，積累大量的經(jīng)典句型和表達(dá)習(xí)慣。能很快的結(jié)合題干做好開篇首段的引入。要求平時在練習(xí)寫作的時候，快速組織語言，并在大腦中儲存大量首段的起始型表達(dá)句式。同時要盡可能多的接觸各種題材的文章，多積累些素材，以掃除知識儲備的空白。如果遇到自己沒見過的題材或是話題，也不必驚慌。三、四級作文大都有固定的套路，要冷靜審題，并在腦子里或是草稿本上理出寫作思路，然后結(jié)合自己的知識儲備逐步逐步的展開，文章依然水到渠成。，用大量經(jīng)典和優(yōu)美的表達(dá)為自己的文章潤色。不管是詞匯、短語還是句子都要力求精準(zhǔn)、地道。平時要學(xué)會背誦和模仿，反復(fù)的誦讀課文或是課外讀物上的一些地道語的表達(dá)，以逐步擺脫漢語式的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。，這就要求平時進(jìn)行大量的口語練習(xí)和寫作練習(xí)，不管是隨機的還是計劃好的，要做到隨時提及到一個問題，馬上要用英文快速的做出反應(yīng)，強制自己的大腦用英語快速思維，掃除語言障礙。如果出現(xiàn)了障礙就馬上停下來，分析障礙出現(xiàn)的原因，解決后馬上重復(fù)練習(xí)，直到能脫口而出，信手拈來。，三級作文30分鐘100字左右，四級作文30分鐘150字左右。平時可以限定自己在25分鐘內(nèi)完成寫作要求，注意思維的敏捷性，同時也要注意提高自己的寫作速度，不過也要兼顧自己的書寫美觀度。以下是兩篇優(yōu)秀范文，請大家注意分析和總結(jié)：(三級作文)：，特別是對災(zāi)區(qū)的小孩子們心靈帶來巨大的重創(chuàng)，請你以大學(xué)生的名義給災(zāi)區(qū)孩子寫一封慰問信，要求不少于100字。A Letter to Children in the DisasterMay, 10, 2009 Dear my little friends, You may feel surprised to receive my letter and even don’t know who I It doesn39。t’ matter and I am writing to you to extend my best wishes and my am a college student, so you can call me big earthquake has taken away many things you loved and cared, but to our great fortune, you all never lose your hope of continuing your life and never give up the determination to conquer the that there are always a lot of people who are giving their concerns and love to you all the we have not seen each other, we are still living in one big up and go on with your life with great will be better!Yours sincerelyXXXX（四級作文）當(dāng)前伴隨著人類文明的發(fā)展和社會的進(jìn)步，世界進(jìn)入了一個新的時代，但是與之同時的是野生動物卻遭遇了滅頂之災(zāi)。全球大量的野生動物數(shù)量急劇下降，甚至很多物種已經(jīng)滅絕或是走向滅絕。請以保護野生動物為話題，分析形勢并給出解決方案，要求不少于150字Saving animalsThere is an undeniable fact that the number of animals is declining faster than ever to a recent survey made by some experts, about 37 species disappear from our earth every is obvious that the problem has bee a serious one worth our we explore this problem, some underlying factors the very first place, human beings have played a big the fast development of human society, the environment is much destroyed, and animals lose their , some species bee ’s more, people hunt animals for food and good case in point is that the Japanese have killed a lot of whales because they like to eat the addition, human beings are largely responsible for the pollution of natural environment, and poison animals in many current problem, I believe, should be solved of all, our government should play a key role in making relevant rules and protecting , the general public should also be educated to value the existence of these animals on our in all, animals belong, as important as human beings, to the same one should live together harmoniously and make the world more ，我特搜集了一些語言表達(dá)，請同學(xué)們認(rèn)真積累，并靈活使用：第一 遣詞（words selection）：very much/quite a lot/greatly/extremely/highly/ extraordinarily/profoundly/considerably/ ：giant/massive/immense/powerful