【正文】
著幾件陳舊卻干凈的衣服……村長四爺爺微微笑著說:”咱村祖上風水好,出秀才,小三子(父親的小名)替咱村爭了一回臉,咱村人臉上光彩……大家來送送娃兒……?眼淚順著爺爺臉上的皺紋滑了下來,爺爺對父親大吼一聲:“給大伙跪下……?父親”嗵“的一聲,雙膝落在泥土地上……”作者寫父親當年考取大學離開村子去讀書時的情景。例如,論證“愛國”角度:正常的思維角度:①愛國是公民的神圣使命②愛國就要為祖國的崛起而努力③愛國不能盲目排外④愛國要從自我作起⑤愛國就不會為祖國的貧窮而悲觀等。這樣,掃描效果好,黑白分明。今年江蘇率先將考生的作文掃描到電腦上批閱,這意味著對書寫提出了高要求。這一形象議論,充滿文化品位和顯豁的哲理。一篇文章如果語言運用得好,內容也許就會妙筆生花:刻畫人物栩栩如生,敘述事件生動活潑,寫景狀物繪聲繪色。江蘇考生《赤兔之死》,就塑造了一個以誠實為本的人格化了的“赤兔馬”的形象,通過伯樂和赤兔馬的對話來敷衍情節(jié),將一個自編的寓言故事切合題旨地娓娓道來?!?《中學語文園地》卷首語2005年第6期)這里用捧碗與放碗形象地詮釋了人的生與死的關系,用“碗”的“圓圈”軌跡與生命的直線的“長度”這一哲學命題,圖解出活著和死了的兩種不同的以及相同的價值取向,充滿了哲理的思辯。一個動作是捧起碗,一個動作是放下碗。例如,2005年福建卷作文題:以“一個圓圈”為題寫一篇作文。老師,還記得我們每一點進步帶給您的喜悅嗎?還記得我們的”屢犯舊錯“帶給您的焦急嗎?還記得您為我們搜集最新高考信息而四處奔波嗎?還記得您閱卷至凌晨的辛勞和您那因過分操勞而嘶啞的聲音嗎?謝謝您,敬愛的老師,請相信我們會在這個六月交給您一份最完美的答卷!爸爸,還記得您為了給我一個絕對安靜的學習環(huán)境而放棄了最愛的足球歐錦賽嗎?媽媽,還記得您為模擬考中失敗的我鼓氣,用并不寬裕的開支為我買營養(yǎng)品嗎?謝謝你們,親愛的父母,我會在這個六月?金榜題名?。特級教師喻旭初諄諄告誡:“文章內容要實實在在。強調句型的靈活使用,可以突出重點,加強語氣: do believe that human beings cannot survive without was not until 7 days later that I discovered his is the government who is supposed to take immediate :虛擬語氣表達的是一種愿望或是一種假設或是一種與事實不符合的描述,在寫作中偶爾穿插一些虛擬表達,可以很好的傳遞寫作情感: people had paid close attention to the endangered troubles, the disaster could not happen time could return, I would go back to the wish I had made her as my friends in my good suggestion can be made that government should set more strict :推測句型用于表達一定可能性,在寫作中借用推測可以使表述更加精準: must have happened ten years guess they couldn’t have e here might change the whole universe :讓步是進行一定得語氣轉述,在習作中讓步的運用可以使表達更加富有節(jié)奏感: though many people died of hunger, the government’s rescue goods were not sent the world economy deeply declined for the Financial Crisis, the Chinese government still have full confidence to keep a rapid economic as he is, he regards all the students as his own :非謂語常包括to do, doing, done三種形式,非謂語表達是拓展句子意思,提高句子質量的關鍵句型,可以說能否靈活的運用非謂語是衡量一個學生語言掌握好壞的一個參照: on this issue, we always ignore some small but important been warned many times, he still turns a deaf ear to in the fire, he was at a always get used to act on their own, overlooking others’ in the final exam, the young man just mitted catch up with America, China has speeded up to develop its all went away, leaving me our ancestors’ steps, we keep all the :包括時間、地點、方式、原因、主語、賓語、定語、同位語等。t’ matter and I am writing to you to extend my best wishes and my am a college student, so you can call me big earthquake has taken away many things you loved and cared, but to our great fortune, you all never lose your hope of continuing your life and never give up the determination to conquer the that there are always a lot of people who are giving their concerns and love to you all the we have not seen each other, we are still living in one big up and go on with your life with great will be better!Yours sincerelyXXXX(四級作文)當前伴隨著人類文明的發(fā)展和社會的進步,世界進入了一個新的時代,但是與之同時的是野生動物卻遭遇了滅頂之災。,三級作文30分鐘100字左右,四級作文30分鐘150字左右。不管是詞匯、短語還是句子都要力求精準、地道。同時要盡可能多的接觸各種題材的文章,多積累些素材,以掃除知識儲備的空白。并且對所給的outline部分一定要仔細閱讀,并融入到自己的寫作當中。并分析歷年的三、四級考試題型中出現(xiàn)的常用詞匯和表達,堅持記憶和聽寫。