【正文】 自己再用英語重反一次，對比英語原文找差距，找不同，體會英漢差異。改正自己漢語味較濃的句子。如:目前，關(guān)于人和動物之間的關(guān)系出現(xiàn)了不同層次的討論。Nowadays,about people and animals’ relationship appear severl different layers of ,尤其是黑體的部分尤為突出，漢語里的出現(xiàn)有及物動詞的性質(zhì)，但直譯為appear就講不通了，因為appear是不及物動詞。這句正確說法應(yīng)該用there be 句型。Nowadays there are discussions on several different levels about the relationship between humans and ：A successful uniform needs to balance two key sets of needs.(大意為：成功的制服主要需要平衡兩種需求。跟自己想到的表達(dá)方式對比一下，黑體部分值得借鑒)On the one hand,no uniform will work if staff feel unfortable or the wearers a choice has bee a key element in the way corporate clothing is introduced and the other , it is pointless if the look do not express the business’s marketing greater chanllenge in this respect(短語“在這個方面”)is it es to human perceptions , first impressions count.(句型)Customers will size up the way staff look in just a few seconds , and that few seconds(習(xí)慣表達(dá)，強(qiáng)調(diào))will color their attitudes(動詞color極其到位，可擴(kuò)展為短語整體記憶)from then few seconds can be so important that big panies are prepared to invest(動詞，形象是否比自己想到的spent 要好？)years,and millions of pounds ,getting them right第三篇：雅思寫作高分雅思寫作大作文必看高分范文TASK 2: 高分范文一Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment。only governments and large panies can make a whatdo you agree or disagree?Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important , whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial view is that every single citizen could also make a huge the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the environment contamination and conservation are the longterm process, and no single government or big pany can meet this challenge whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it。environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate , the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and panies’ example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the panies that manufacture such products will switch to environmentalfriendly substitutes in order to survive in the , that is not to say that governments and large panies cannot positively , governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s lowcarbon awareness。panies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the , local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop lowcarbon economy at the macro by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation 2: 高分范文二ArgumentationThe Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been are your opinions on this?The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives i