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成這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)或者受到這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)的影響)。 There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)相反的觀點(diǎn)。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下參照辯論文的議論文寫(xiě)法)。 3. 社會(huì)問(wèn)題(現(xiàn)象)式 A.一個(gè)社會(huì)問(wèn)題或者現(xiàn)象。 B. 產(chǎn)生的原因 C.對(duì)社會(huì)和我們生活的影響 D. 如何杜絕。(如果是問(wèn)題的話) E. 前景的預(yù)測(cè)。 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly bee a mon concern of the public). According to a survey, 調(diào)查內(nèi)容說(shuō)明這種現(xiàn)象的情況。(或者是一個(gè)例子)。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面參照辯論式議論文的寫(xiě)法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 參照辯論式議論文的寫(xiě)法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 參照辯論式議論文的寫(xiě)法。 Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will …….. 高考書(shū)面表達(dá)實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí):一、(2009全國(guó)卷I、海南、寧夏卷)假定你是李華,正在英國(guó)接受英語(yǔ)培訓(xùn),住在一戶英國(guó)人家里。今天你的房東Mrs Wilson 不在家,你準(zhǔn)備外出,請(qǐng)給Mrs Wilson 寫(xiě)一留言條,內(nèi)容包括: 1.外出購(gòu)物 2.替房東還書(shū) 3.Tracy 來(lái)電話留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見(jiàn)面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3) 盡快回電 注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 Mrs Wilson, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【參考范文】 Mrs Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Li Hua 【解析】 作文題仍然同去年一樣,屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文,要求學(xué)生就所給內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一張留言條,是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材,體現(xiàn)了英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性,生活型的原則。應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn):1)注意人稱(chēng),應(yīng)該用第一人稱(chēng)的形式給房東(第二人稱(chēng))寫(xiě)便條;2)注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用:從試題的內(nèi)容上可以看出在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)1和2時(shí)應(yīng)用將來(lái)時(shí);而要點(diǎn)3中的幾個(gè)方面則需要注意時(shí)態(tài)的替換,會(huì)用到一般過(guò)去時(shí),現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)。3)注意恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ),是各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫,行文通順。提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)不是簡(jiǎn)單的逐條翻譯,而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語(yǔ)句,因此要仔細(xì)組織語(yǔ)言,合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語(yǔ)言方面,要特別注意簡(jiǎn)潔明了,開(kāi)頭要開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山?!緦?zhuān)家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】依然保持全國(guó)卷I短文寫(xiě)作的老套路:人物李華(自1999年以來(lái),中間除了02年,統(tǒng)統(tǒng)都是李華同學(xué)在寫(xiě)信,歷時(shí)十年,眾多效尤者),話題為簡(jiǎn)單的外語(yǔ)外事活動(dòng),形式為寫(xiě)信(郵件或留言),實(shí)則依然是短文寫(xiě)作,控制程度較高,體裁以陳述說(shuō)明為主。二、()假定你是李華,你的美國(guó)朋友sarah 打算暑期來(lái)北京旅游,來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)改建后前門(mén)大街的情況。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封回信,簡(jiǎn)單介紹以下內(nèi)容: 1. 簡(jiǎn)況:長(zhǎng)800余米、600多年歷史、300余家商鋪; 2. 位置:天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)南面; 3. 交通:公共汽車(chē)1659等路,地鐵2號(hào)線; 4. 特色:步行街、當(dāng)當(dāng)車(chē)、茶館、劇院等。 參考詞匯:步行街 pedestrian street 當(dāng)當(dāng)車(chē) trolley car 地鐵 subway 注意: 1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好,請(qǐng)將完整的回信書(shū)寫(xiě)在答題卡上。Dear Sarah. Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________