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的重復(fù)與累贅,使句子更簡練、精確;主動(dòng)句與被動(dòng)句交替使用,使句子更具多樣性;分詞(短語)及 with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)合使用,使得文章句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,描述形象生動(dòng),為文章增色。 有效地使用語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 是高考書面表達(dá)重要的評分依據(jù)。 二、注重寫作句式,提高寫作能力 五校聯(lián)考作文: 學(xué)生作文 1: As is shown in the picture above,the student is pessimistic about his study, even he don’t want to study at all, which surprises his teacher a lot. As a matter of fact, it is a mon condition among the students. Students often owes it to their low IQ rather than seek for their disadvantage. It will have a bad effect on their study. In my view,study is a slow and hard process . To begin with, we should have a right attitude towards study. However hard study is, we as long as try our best to learn knowledge which can equip ourselves. In addition a good way to study is also important. Sometimes we can’t learn well. Why not change our way to study? Perhaps our changing can make a difference on our study. To sum up, study matters for us a lot. We should take our study into consideration seriously. Don’t give up our study. Work harder and you will find that you can succeed. 學(xué)生作文 2: As is shown in the picture above, a teacher asked a student why he didn’t study. What the student said really shocked me a lot. The student said that he was too stupid to study. Was it the reason that the student didn’t study? Of course not. As a matter of fact, most of people have the same IQ . However, some students are so lazy the they don’t want to study hard. In order to escape this responsibility, they blame it to their IQ. They make it to be believed that they are too stupid to study or make good progress. Day by day, their study bee worse and worse. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view tha