【正文】 the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．（江蘇中考模擬）三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，你一定對(duì)初中生活留下了很多美好的回憶。下周五你班要召開畢業(yè)班會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的英文提示，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以“I remember ”為題，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，分享你校園生活中的一次活動(dòng)或經(jīng)歷。要點(diǎn)如下：1. What’s the event? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. How did you feel at that moment?4. How has the event changed your life? 注意：，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。I remember How time flies! My junior school life is ing to an end. 【答案】I rememberHow time flies, my junior school life is ing to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale. When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children. It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如e to an end，plan to do，a lot of，hold a charity sale，prepare for，in our spare time，hold on，at first，e to join us，give us some help，in the end，a lot，in need等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6．（天津中考模擬）假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的李華，你校成功舉辦了“中華詩(shī)詞朗誦比賽”，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，介紹活動(dòng)情況并呼吁更多的人參與這樣的活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：時(shí)間地點(diǎn)5月23號(hào)下午；學(xué)校禮堂。活動(dòng)介紹每學(xué)期舉辦一次。今年又大獲成功。同學(xué)們的精彩表現(xiàn)得到了大家的高度評(píng)價(jià)。八年級(jí)的王麗獲一等獎(jiǎng)。她極具朗誦天賦。每位獲勝者贏得一張免費(fèi)書展的票。呼吁參與的理由......（自擬1到2點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：（1）須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、行文連貫作、適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右，文稿的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；參考詞匯：中華詩(shī)詞朗誦比賽 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition。表現(xiàn) performance。 高度評(píng)價(jià)think highly of 。朗誦recite。天賦gift。免費(fèi)的freeI39。m Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school... 【答案】I39。m Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school held a Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition on the afternoon of May 23rd. It was held in the school hall. The petition is held every tram. This year it was a big success again. All the teachers and students thought highly of the students39。 wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the book show.I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture【解析】【詳解】本題是一篇給材料作文，介紹“中華詩(shī)詞朗誦比賽”活動(dòng)情況并呼吁更多的人參與這樣的活動(dòng)。短文用第一人稱和第三人稱，還會(huì)用到被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的句子。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文，其次考生可根據(jù)表格中的要點(diǎn)提示去寫作。文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．（江蘇中考模擬）目前，許多中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班，對(duì)此人們有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。 贊成者的觀點(diǎn)1. 能夠?qū)W得更好，考試考得更好，上更好的高中；2. 避免花太多時(shí)間看電視、玩游戲。反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)1. 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息；2. 壓力過大不利于身體健康。你的觀點(diǎn)1. 課堂上好好學(xué)就足夠了，補(bǔ)課不必要；2. 課后可以自己......注意：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法通順，上下文連貫；2. 必須包括提示的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)；3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.