【正文】 進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況: 時(shí)間: 上周末對(duì)象: 眼科醫(yī)生（eyedoctor）王教授主題: 我國(guó)中小學(xué)生近視（shortsightedness）問(wèn)題基本信息:（1）發(fā)生率: 略高于50％（2）人數(shù): 世界第一專家解讀:（1）原因: 很復(fù)雜（2）治療: 沒(méi)有哪一種藥物能治愈近視（3）建議: 不要過(guò)度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng)（4）特別提示: 如何握筆也和近視有關(guān) [寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容] 根據(jù)以上情況寫(xiě)一篇采訪報(bào)道，并包括如下內(nèi)容: 、對(duì)象和主題； ； 。[寫(xiě)作要求] 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹?Last weekend, I had an interview with eyedoctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the in the world, are Wang said the reason of shortsightedness is plicated and three is still no cure for suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor ’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the shortsightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.【解析】本文題材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，這個(gè)話題真正的做到“話題來(lái)源于學(xué)生實(shí)際生活”。近視眼是每個(gè)校園所必不可少的現(xiàn)象，是學(xué)生校園生活得隱形熱點(diǎn)。因此今年的基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作題目讓每個(gè)學(xué)生都有話可說(shuō)。考生要注意三大要點(diǎn)和表格內(nèi)容，恰當(dāng)表達(dá)即可?！緦＜液?jiǎn)評(píng)】本題話題為近視問(wèn)題，天津卷曾涉及過(guò)（07天津卷：How to Protect Our Eyesight）。但角度有不同。廣東卷側(cè)重的是問(wèn)題本身的描述，而天津則是強(qiáng)調(diào)的如何保護(hù)視力。不過(guò)，能有做天津卷的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，對(duì)廣東卷也就不會(huì)有難的感覺(jué)。更何況廣東卷所給信息非常充分，對(duì)于考生而言，剩下的主要是組織句子了。需要特別指出的是，陳說(shuō)性質(zhì)的文體其核心在于陳述和說(shuō)明（包括介紹），即講清楚一樁事情。第二節(jié) 讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)（共1小題，滿分25分）閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern the koalas there are unhappy and would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it ’s right—sleep it average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? * 考拉即樹(shù)袋熊 [寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容] ；“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括:（1）人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照；（2）假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)；（3）你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。[寫(xiě)作要求] ，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縏he passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and plaining for tourists taking author appeals to us to be more kind to reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being having peaceful surroundings tosleep, don’t you suffer restless and doubt we do and so do the think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals, making a fortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.【解析】今年的讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)讓學(xué)生就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”展開(kāi)議論。議論文的寫(xiě)作有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生正確的價(jià)值觀，糾正不正確的價(jià)值觀。今年的讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)暗中旨在培養(yǎng)學(xué)生保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的觀念、把多一點(diǎn)的空間還給動(dòng)物的觀念、與動(dòng)物和諧共存的觀念。如果考生從“應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”這一觀點(diǎn)入手的話就迎合了閱讀材料，同時(shí)也能夠受到改卷老師的青睞。【專家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】自2007年廣東卷改革以來(lái)，寫(xiě)作部分的兩個(gè)試題在寫(xiě)作要求上均過(guò)于詳細(xì)，控制程度很高。尤其是后者，盡管是閱讀后的寫(xiě)作，但要領(lǐng)已經(jīng)被列出，實(shí)際上難度已經(jīng)大大下降。當(dāng)然，廣東卷這么做的主要目的無(wú)外乎便于教師閱卷，收縮考生的思維，不給考生跑題的機(jī)會(huì)。但是若往深的追問(wèn)，本題給學(xué)生的思維空間并不多，這個(gè)值得考量。三年來(lái)，廣東卷已經(jīng)在短文寫(xiě)作上逐漸形成定勢(shì)。十五、（）假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00 內(nèi)容：采摘蘋(píng)果報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前提示：帶帽子、手套注意：，開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。：社區(qū) munity 第二節(jié)：一、評(píng)分原則，按5個(gè)檔次給分。，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。，從總分中減去2分。：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00 ：采摘蘋(píng)果：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前 ：帶帽子、手套【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our munity is going to organize an activity for all the munity Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’ you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of are looking forward to your joining Office 【解析】本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見(jiàn)的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。第一步：審題看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排。可以先將活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來(lái)；然后再寫(xiě)5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。第二步：寫(xiě)作可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語(yǔ)去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡(jiǎn)單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句等，但句式不易過(guò)于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過(guò)渡自然。第三步：檢查作文寫(xiě)完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)對(duì)了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)用對(duì)了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔?！緦＜液?jiǎn)評(píng)】主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W校活動(dòng)無(wú)關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所開(kāi)展的社區(qū)活動(dòng)，主題空間更為開(kāi)闊，因此該主題大體符合高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作話題的一般思路，可以歸類為外事活動(dòng)。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語(yǔ)題干形式給出，對(duì)考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。因?yàn)橐c(diǎn)內(nèi)容的呈現(xiàn)一般看不出英語(yǔ)的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語(yǔ)題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)。這本身就是一種便利。因此，對(duì)于各命題單位而言，這幾種形式都應(yīng)該依據(jù)整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用，以免過(guò)難或過(guò)易。十六、（）5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽(yáng)光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）開(kāi)展志愿者活動(dòng)（）。假如你是校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的記者，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則100120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道。； ； 。注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不記詞數(shù)）。Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderlys5【參考范文】Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly weled, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and , they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it Yue and Zhang Hua were very they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own Chen Jie, School Newspaper 【解析】本文仍屬于提綱式半開(kāi)放性體裁的作文，選材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，有利于考生的正常發(fā)揮，考生只要按照所給要點(diǎn)的思路來(lái)寫(xiě)即可?！緦＜液?jiǎn)評(píng)】09浙江卷的話題和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了無(wú)新意。但這并不就說(shuō)明該卷乏善可陳。若從以考生為本