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are time/ develop a reading habit./ Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading bee a part of our life!;(二)根據(jù)提綱連詞成句,連句成篇,注意連詞的使用。(三)寫完以后,在閱讀一遍,檢查單詞拼寫,語法,動詞時態(tài),語序,大小寫,標(biāo)點符號,主謂一致等是否有錯誤。點睛:這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文,語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順。(1)學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。(2)注意給出的起始句(這就給出了時態(tài)),學(xué)生運用正確的時態(tài),運用所給或所學(xué)的詞語,盡量運用熟悉的句型。(3)列好提綱和要點,及需要的重要短語或句型。(3)切忌堆砌詞語,句子,注意運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢,連貫。注意表達的順序。 (4)注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫,標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。(5)注意檢查:單詞拼寫,語法,動詞時態(tài),語序,主謂一致等。12.(北京中考模擬)為了幫助同學(xué)們樹立集體觀念和提高班級責(zé)任感,你校英文報刊正在以“ Building a Harmonious Class” (創(chuàng)建和諧班級)為題征文,請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)劙嗉壋?員應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體,作為一名成員,你通常是怎么做的,以及還需要再做些什么。提示詞語: important, respect, trust, help提示問題: ● Why should we build a harmonious class?● As a member of a class, what do you usually do?● What else do you need to do?We should build a harmonious class because ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是:你們學(xué)校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文,你來為校刊投稿,談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文,題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱,具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考,發(fā)揮想象力來充實完成。因此首先我們要仔細思考這個問題,結(jié)合自己的真實生活,想一想平時是怎么做的,應(yīng)該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個難點。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達出來,英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,寫作時,不能逐詞去翻譯,而應(yīng)從文章、句子的整體考慮,首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述;可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型,每個句子應(yīng)以簡單句為基礎(chǔ),如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu),然后再變化成較高級、復(fù)雜是句型,如復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞,使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為,使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述,符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范,句式表達符合英語的習(xí)慣。文章中以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句,調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu),使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級的句型,提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。13.(四川中考模擬)書面表達根據(jù)青少年讀書少的現(xiàn)象,請根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息,用英語寫一份向全校同學(xué)提出的倡議。讀書的意義獲取知識,增長見識,使人聰明,使人快樂,有助于學(xué)習(xí),有助于成長。目前的狀況聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占去了學(xué)生大部分的讀書時間。發(fā)出倡議多讀書,讀好書。注意:詞數(shù)80左右;倡議書的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);倡議書須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,行文連貫,表達清楚。參考詞匯:gain knowledge獲取知識。 open the mind增長見識.My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life, Let’s start reading now!【答案】My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will do us good!Let’s start reading now!【解析】本文是一篇倡議書。要求根據(jù)青少年讀書少的現(xiàn)象,根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息,用英語寫一份向全校同學(xué)提出的倡議書。內(nèi)容包括讀書的意義、大部分學(xué)生目前的狀況、最后發(fā)出倡議。本文時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱用第一人稱。本文中給出的要點比較具體,考生需要把所提示的內(nèi)容逐條翻譯成英文,要涵蓋提示內(nèi)容的所有要點,同時注意理順要點,防止漏寫。寫作中可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮,注意語句要通順,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系;同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,詞匯書寫無誤,注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤,詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,避免句式單一,這樣會使文章更出色。14.(北京中考模擬)自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺,生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華,請你為??⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?,分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷,并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語:powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing提示問題:Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式,采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫,有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。點睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時語言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯的范文。15.(北京中考模擬)友誼是焦渴時的甘泉, 黑暗中的明燈; 友誼是快樂時的分享, 憂傷時的撫慰……某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展“ Friendship”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勀阕钫湟暤囊欢斡颜x,主要內(nèi)容包括:你最好的朋友是誰,你們?nèi)绾纬蔀楹门笥训模约澳銥槭裁凑湟暷銈冎g的友誼。提示詞語:in trouble, help, encourage, together, treasure, happy提示問題:Who is your best friend?How did you bee best friends?Why do you treasure the friendship between you?As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyone39。s life. Friends are your part of life. Friends make you believe that there really is good