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time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如hold a class meeting,talk about,the result of,keep healthy,after school,have more time to do,want to do,such as,listen to music,in favor of,clean the room,play tennis等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化;同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理,層次分明,是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.書面表達(dá)近年來,人們非常關(guān)注學(xué)生的安全。很多學(xué)校為此取消了許多有意義的外出活動,如春游、夏令營、野餐等。假設(shè)你是育英中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生張明,請給鄭校長發(fā)一封電子郵件,就此發(fā)表自己的看法。要點如下:1. 安全第一,但開展一些戶外活動還是有必要的;2. 通過這些活動,學(xué)生不僅能增長知識,還能開拓視野;3. 與大自然親密接觸,能增強同學(xué)們的環(huán)保意識;4. 建議學(xué)校在活動之前教給學(xué)生一些安全常識,讓學(xué)生學(xué)會保護(hù)自己和自救。參考詞匯:outdoor activities戶外活動;open up one’s eyes開闊視野注意:1. 詞數(shù)80—100;2. 請不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名;4. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr. Zheng,I’m sorry to trouble you. I’m Zhang Ming, a student from Yuying High School. I’m writing to you about outdoor activities.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Zhang Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Zheng,I’m sorry to trouble you. I’m Zhang Ming, a student from Yuying High school. V m writing to you about outdoor activities.Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us, dear headmaster? Of course, safety es first. But it’s necessary for us to take part in such activities.In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes in this way. What’s more, it’s a good way for us to learn to protect the environment by staying close to the nature. And we can get on well with our teachers and classmates.Why not show us some safety knowledge before these activities. It’s a good chance for us to learn to protect and save ourselves.Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Ming【解析】【詳解】近年來,人們非常關(guān)注學(xué)生的安全。很多學(xué)校為此取消了許多有意義的外出活動,如春游、夏令營、野餐等。假設(shè)你是育英中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生張明,請給鄭校長發(fā)一封電子郵件,就此發(fā)表自己的看法。這是一篇給材料作文,介紹自己的度假計劃本文做給材料比較詳細(xì),敘述中注意將要點中的事情介紹清楚,可以適當(dāng)取舍。動筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時態(tài),句式,詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文時態(tài)問題比較復(fù)雜,注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題,人稱主要是第一人稱。寫作中注意使用連接詞,注意表達(dá)的多樣化,做到語意連貫符合邏輯?!军c睛】文中用到了一些好的句型,這些句型給文中增色不少,如:Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us;In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes in this way.7. 閱讀可以使人開闊視野,閱讀可使人心曠神怡,不管是參加中國漢字聽寫大會,還是中國詩詞大會,都需要有良好的閱讀基礎(chǔ)。下面請大家談?wù)勯喿x的好處并在生活中養(yǎng)成良好的閱讀習(xí)慣。注意:作文字?jǐn)?shù),不低于60字.參考詞匯:increase our knowledge open up our eyes improve writing skills learn the world affairs without going out make the life colorfulReading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.【答案】Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading.Firstly, reading increases our knowledge. It teaches us skills about getting a good job, cooking and so on. Secondly, reading is a good