【正文】 High School Life 【答案】I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go there to eat some nice and healthy food with my new hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my school,I hope to do afterclass activities in the free time. I hope these will e ture.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do some sports，such as，play basketball，play tennis，get on well with，make progress，after school，hope to do，in the free time，e ture等。而And I hpe there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. / I hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball, playing ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，可把提示的內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子，最后把這些句子連在一起即可。12．（濟寧市第八中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達假如你們學(xué)校正在開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)（exploring learning strategies），請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一篇短文，讓更多的學(xué)生了解你校開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)的一些情況。注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格提示的所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。過去現(xiàn)在課堂老師講解知識點，學(xué)生聽講，記筆記，沒有足夠的時間獨立思考問題。老師提出問題，學(xué)生相互討論，并學(xué)會與他人合作,從而找出解決問題的方法。課后做大量的作業(yè)。豐富多彩的課外活動，如：讀自己喜歡的書，去圖書館或上網(wǎng)查資料等。個人感受……Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. ________________________________________【答案】Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think about problems by ourselves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on.In a word, now we are the owners of our study and we’re happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。本文主要所用時態(tài)主要是一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。仔細閱讀內(nèi)容提示，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容列好提綱。內(nèi)容要包括所提供的信息及要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。字數(shù)在100詞左右。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。根據(jù)要點列提綱：自從學(xué)校開始開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)以來，我們的學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)生了很大的變化。過去，老師在課堂上不斷地講解語言要點。我們學(xué)生只是聽并做了一些筆記。所以我們沒有足夠的時間獨自思考問題。課后我們不得不做很多家庭作業(yè)。但是現(xiàn)在老師們先把問題展示給我們，然后我們成對或分組討論一會兒。我們試圖找出解決問題的方法，通過這些方法，我們學(xué)會了如何與他人合作學(xué)習(xí)。下課后，我們可以進行不同的活動。例如，我們可以閱讀我們喜歡的書，去圖書館或者上網(wǎng)尋找有用的信息等等?？傊?，現(xiàn)在我們是我們學(xué)習(xí)的主人，我們感到很高興。【點睛】文中能很好的利用連詞（In the past ，So, But now, then，In a word）使文章更緊湊，條理。特別注意了時態(tài)語態(tài)的正確運用（In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. / But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. t.），文中用到了復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)（We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others..）。學(xué)習(xí)中要牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。寫作前列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達的順序。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。要養(yǎng)成檢查的習(xí)慣，注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。13．（廣東中考模擬）隨著社會的發(fā)展，通訊的方式從遠古時代的書信到當(dāng)今的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，經(jīng)歷著巨大的變化。請你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些？2. 它們的優(yōu)點和缺點是什么？3. 你認為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么？要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校名稱和姓名；2. 語意連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點和缺點是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。14．（黑龍江中考模擬）話題作文：根據(jù)漢語提示和要求寫一篇短文。（A和B兩篇，可任選一篇）現(xiàn)在有許多新的購物方式，網(wǎng)上購物就是其中的一種。越來越多的人熟悉和喜歡網(wǎng)購，但是網(wǎng)購有利有弊，請根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語以“Online shopping”為題寫一篇短文，描述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點和缺點，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。?yōu)點：可以在任何時候購物；只需要一臺電腦和鼠標(biāo)；方便比較同類產(chǎn)品的價格，可以省錢；無論何時何地都可以收到所購物品。缺點：網(wǎng)上付款有時不安全；看不到實物，也不能試穿衣服。注意：語意連貫，表達準(zhǔn)確；詞數(shù)80－100。字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮縊nline shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a puter and mouse. Third, you can pare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的利與弊。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞