【正文】 例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提2點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫作時注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 8．近來，美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語的建議。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語，題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面：首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)；最后寫一個適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you h