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Heroes of the Marshes(濕地 ) the four great classical Chinese novels [‘kl230。 novels the 4 great classical Chinese novels Sunshine Library friends help her relax open up a whole new world to her 開啟,開創(chuàng) ? and ? but ? … *Transitions(過渡語(yǔ) ) *Useful expressions ? spend …read ing ? different types of books ? before going to bed ? be interested in ? give me advice on… ? discuss what to read ? Good books are good friends. ? help me relax ? open up a whole new world to me ask sb. for advice on … We should make friends with good books. ? However, ? Therefore, ? Moreover =What’s more,… ? Not only…, but also…. ? on the other hand, … ? In all, … ? In a word,… 總的來說 1. One idea per paragraph 2. More details about your reading habits 3. Different types of sentence structures (句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣化) 4. Use transitions(過渡句) to connect the ideas 5. Not many grammar, spelling, punctuation(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)) mistakes My reading habits I love reading books. It usually takes me more than five hours a week to enjoy different types of books. Among them, I like novels best, because they are easy to understand. I am interested in history books too. They can not only improve my knowledge but also help me collect information for a report. I get most books from the school library, the books there are all free. I also like to buy books online. Sometimes I have to spend lots of time choosing good books. So I will ask my teachers for advice on books. My friends and I often meet together and discuss what to read. In a word, reading is a fantastic time. We should learn to make friends with good books. It is an amazing way to relax after a hard day’ s work. Books also open up a whole new world to me. * Clear structure * Ideas * Language Para1 : Time spent in reading books