【正文】 加分亮點： beyondreproach 無可非議 beacpaniedby?有??陪同 declareinnouncertainterms 毫不諱言 fiercepetition 激烈的競爭 essential 至關重要的 clingtothebelief 堅信 Part2:2021 年 6 月 拼寫 ?? ，我認為?? DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling Nowadays, ①anincreasingnumberofstudentsseemtoattachlessimportancetospellinginEnglishlearning. ②Thus,numerousmisspellingsappearintheirpapers, ③ andwhat ”sworse,awellanizedessayisthereforetotallyimpossible. ④Therearevariousreasonsresponsibleforthisembarrassingsituation. ⑤Foronthing,muchmorestudentsgiveprioritiestooralEnglishatthecostofdosinglessspellingexercises,letalonereflectonwhattheylearnedtheotherday. ⑥Foranother,manyteachersputsomuchemphasisonmunicationandgrammarinteachingthattheyseldomhighlightspelling,andoccasionallyworsestill,theythemselvesarecaughtinspelling. Tochangethissituation, ⑦Iholdtothebeliefthatstudentsandteachersshouldworktogether. ⑧Ontheonehand,studentsshouldstopplainingaboutspellings,andtheyshouldrealizecorrectspellingisamustinlearningEnglish. ⑨Ontheotherhand,teachersshouldpaymoreattentiontospellinginteaching,forexample,focusingonpronunciationandwordformation. Onlyviajointeffortcanstudentsgainmuchgroundinspelling. 精彩點評： ①開門見山，描述現(xiàn)象：很多學生不重視拼寫。④本段分析造成上述結果的原因。⑦概括提出解決問題的方法。最后結尾常用的倒裝句，總結前文。②點名綠色校園的重要意義。④半倒裝句的運用恰到好處，引出下文要闡述的內容，即社會各界應行動起來，推動綠色校園的建設。⑦結尾常用的倒裝句，總結前文。并說明這樣做的目的。③和④運用關聯(lián)詞 Forohing?Foranother? ,使文章層次分明。⑥最后提出希望，總結全文。②利用轉折，承接下文，提出問題。④運用遞進結構 What?sworse? ,使文章有層次感。⑥使用倒裝句，總結全文。②提出討論的問題：社會對娛樂活動的爭論。④和⑤運用對比結構Somebelievethat? While?說明不同的觀點。⑦給出原因。②話鋒一轉，支出大家選擇選修課 的目的各不相同。另外本段使用了 sothat,inorderthat 等結構，使文章結構連貫。⑧再次闡明觀點，回應主題。②列舉豐富的活動，說 服 力 強 ，更 能 吸引 學 生 加入 。⑥語言口語化，鼓動性強。 加分亮點： inevitably 不 可 避 免 地 participatein 參加freeofcharge 免費 Part9:2021 年 12 月 ?? SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV ① TheCCTVSpringFestivalGalaisoneofChina ?smostpopularannualtelevisionevents,watchedbymillionsofpeopleontheeveofthelunarNewYear. ②However,inrecentyears,the4hourshowislosingitsappeal,especiallytoyoungsters. ③atthestereotypedGalashouldgivewaytodiversemoderncelebrations.④However,theEveningGalahas ⑤somewhatbeeatraditionsinceitwasinitiatedinthe1980s.⑥ What?smore,watchingtheshowisanindispensablepartofthefestivalforthem. ⑦ThoughtheGalaisnolongerpopularwithyoungpeople,Ienjoywatchingtheshowwithmyfamily. ⑧Yettomaintaintheinterestoftheyounggeneration,theanizingcommitteeshoulddevelopaprogrammoreexciting,morecolorfulandmoreentertainingthanthepreviousones. ⑨ Forexample,it ?sagoodideatoinvitesomebignamesinChina ?sfilmandmusicindustriestoperformontheGalastage. 精彩點評“①開門見山，支出春節(jié)晚會的影響力。 Show 使主語表達簡介。⑤ somewhat 起緩和語氣的作用。⑦這一句型用于提出自己觀點。⑨舉例說明。②③④為并列平行結構，列舉學生需要考慮的因素。⑥將“選課“這一動作轉換為名詞形式。⑧運用payattentionto“關注”的被動形式。 DearEditor ，Thankyouforyourstartingaspecia1co1umnjorthediscussiononspace,itseemstomethatourspaceprojectssofarhavebeeninthemainawasteofmoney,time,energy,humanlivesandresources. Therichercountriesarepouringlargesumsofmoneyintospaceresearchprogramswhichareofnobenefittohumanbeingswhileinunderdevelop,manyscientists ’timeandenergyarewasted,whichcouldhavebeendevotedtoimprovingo ’smore,manyastronautshavediedplete1yuselesslyinspacevehicl ’,thereisthewathinkit’ 年 6月全國大學英語四級考試作文范文Anannouncementforavoluntaryprogram ，現(xiàn)招聘志愿者 、內容及安排 ModelEssay: Dearfellowstudents, Attention,please!Wearenowrecruitingvolunteerstoparticipatein(takepartin/getinvolvedin)avoluntaryprogramheldbythestudentunionduringthesummerbreak. ,thisactivityisaimedatcultivating(givingaboostto)yoursenseofresponsibility,broadeningyourvisionandsharpeningyouredgebecause,asoureconomyevolvesatanincrediblespeed,itisbeingincreasinglyvitalfond,ouractivitybeginsatJuly10thandendsatJuly20th..Plus,thescheduleinvolvesblooddonation,lookingafterseniorcitizensandconductingasurveyonthecity ’strafficsystemtoputforwardoursuggestions. Anyfulltimeorparttimestudentsinourcollegeareweledtojoin,pleasecallusat135******orsendy. Comeon,guys! 人 :individual/character/folk/youngadult/oldadult/seniorcitizen/peopleintheirlateadulthood 網(wǎng)絡 :the/theInter/theweb/thevirtualworld/theelectronicworld/thecyberworld 地球 :earth/thePlaearth/ourMotherPla/globalvillage 電腦 :theputer/themachine/thedevice 校園 :thecampus/theIvoryTower/therelativelyisolatedplace 社會 :thesociety/therealworld 中國 :China/theMiddleKingdom/thisancientcountry 隨著 ...的發(fā)展 :As...evolves ...變的越來越重要 ..isbeingincreasinglyvital ...變的越來越普遍 ..isbeingincreasinglyprevalent 人們對 ...越來越重視 Peoplehaveagrowingrespectforsth. 人們重視 /看中 /珍愛某物 placeahighvalueonsth. 增強競爭力 sharpenone’ sedge 使某人具有優(yōu)勢力 ...很重要 isvital/crucial/essential 起 ... 重 要 作 用playacentralroleinDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteapositiononthetopic:Whatdoesfriendshipmean?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourpositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below: 底意味著什么 3..友誼的重要性。whenyouaresad,friendshipisadoseofconsolation。ifyouhaveahardnuttocrack,youcandEngel,whichfirmlybinedthemandpushedthemforwardontheroadt