【正文】 e.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話(huà)題，結(jié)合所給的寫(xiě)作材料，寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)刊征文稿。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞（組）的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：It is +形容詞+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。要求從個(gè)人外貌特點(diǎn)、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。短文用第一人稱(chēng)形式，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。文中的不定式作賓補(bǔ)、作定語(yǔ)、作賓語(yǔ)用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)；and連接的并列句、并列謂語(yǔ)等等都使短文顯得簡(jiǎn)捷生動(dòng)。10．B解析：Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)要包括：。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。11．C解析：iPads, ing into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根據(jù)題目要求，需要書(shū)寫(xiě)一篇議論文，探討iPad進(jìn)課堂這一現(xiàn)象，以及人們對(duì)此的不同觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度。結(jié)合觀點(diǎn)式議論文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出問(wèn)題現(xiàn)象，第二段表達(dá)支持這種行為做法的原因和好處，第三段描述反對(duì)人的觀點(diǎn)及原因，最后一段表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式第二段：SomearefavortheofX.Theyoutfact_______________________支持Xalsothat的另一個(gè)原因。otherstandaground.TheyittoX.Theypointthat的第一個(gè)理由。examplegivedetailsthis________________一個(gè)例子。第四段：Theresomeinarguments.ButthinkadvantagesXtheadditionthenegativeitbringXmay的有一個(gè)壞處?？梢苑秩螌?xiě)。第二段要寫(xiě)詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊?！驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮?？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱(chēng)？，記敘文？說(shuō)明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。13．G解析：Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。同時(shí)For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。15．D解析：Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。s our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。17．H解析：How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should