【正文】 lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。 support and our classmates39。9．A解析：As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。：例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，主要講述如何實現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。：高分短語：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。10．A解析：A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。寫作亮點：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時態(tài)。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。文章需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱。注意多使用固定短語，固定句型，使文章增色。第一段：提出現(xiàn)象。peopleinofideadoingpointthethat的第一個原因。Theyargue_____________________________支持X第三段：However,peopleondifferentconsiderharmfuldofirmlyout________________________反對XAncantheofargument:istruthbothItheofoverweighdisadvantages.Intoabovementionedeffectsmightabout,alsoX12．E解析：Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，不能逐字翻譯。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個激勵過你的人是誰，他是怎樣的一個人；然后介紹他是如何激勵你的。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯?？梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個人是誰，第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質(zhì)以及對自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。14．B解析：Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\動的觀點和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。15．B解析：例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，正在為此作出努力?！军c睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇