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ikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.(難題) In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】(建議)【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富,表達(dá)了所有要點(diǎn),語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,意思連貫,符合邏輯。s known that it has many advantages.,F(xiàn)irst of all, it39?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題,根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇短文,表達(dá)自己對(duì)共享單車的看法和建議。3.為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個(gè)選題。內(nèi)容提示:1. 楊時(shí)去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時(shí)在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時(shí)在門口2. 通過介紹這個(gè)故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)?!敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,主要介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí),靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞的過去式。寫作時(shí),避免漢語式英語。4.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,為學(xué)校廣播站英語專欄寫一篇短文,介紹發(fā)生在你好朋友王強(qiáng)Wang Qiang身上的一件事。,所有車輛都一個(gè)接一個(gè)通過十字路口。,主動(dòng)上前攔住了車輛領(lǐng)著老人安全過了路口。,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),人稱為第三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:The lady hesitated……,but she was afraid……,he offered to……,Wang Qiang is…..等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭介紹了王強(qiáng)騎車回家的路上看見一位老太太不敢過馬路,接下來介紹他主動(dòng)上前攔住了車輛領(lǐng)著老人安全過了路口,最后我就這件事談?wù)勎业南敕ā?.書面表達(dá)4月28日,國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國(guó)北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開幕式,提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”(fivepoint initiative on green development),為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國(guó)智慧。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然,如:綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然,如:讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與,從身邊小事做起,如:適度節(jié)約,拒絕浪費(fèi)……;做到人與自然的和諧。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。所提供的材料中列舉了你打算向?qū)W校申請(qǐng)建立一個(gè)社團(tuán)( Chinese Culture Club)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。寫作時(shí),避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性。to plete different projects是動(dòng)詞不定式,做work together的目的。句子everyone in the club will benefit a 。請(qǐng)就此用英語寫一篇短文,主要內(nèi)容包括:1.描述親身經(jīng)歷的一次失??;2.?dāng)⒄f失敗后如何獲得成功;3.談?wù)勀愕母邢搿6涛牡拈_頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。要求介紹介紹失敗的經(jīng)歷,及從中的收獲和感想。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng):這篇短文條理通暢,能將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)完整。3. 高分亮點(diǎn):短語和連詞的使用:be full of ,ups and downs,too…to…,help out,before,if,lay against,deal with等。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī),按時(shí)到校、離校;2. 不接受陌生人的物品;3. 結(jié)伴同行,天黑前到家;4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二,我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去,也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西?!靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。9.書面表達(dá)近日,你校迎來一批來自英國(guó)的交流生,學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。歷史歷史悠久,享譽(yù)世界。習(xí)俗以茶會(huì)友,饋贈(zèng)親朋。影響……(自擬兩點(diǎn))。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。本文人稱主要是第三人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容,條理清楚,字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤(時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等)。它歷史悠久,享譽(yù)世界。它們中的每一個(gè)都有自己的特點(diǎn)。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。喝茶有益于人們的健康。茶不僅有助于外國(guó)人了解中國(guó),而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁??忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。寫作六步法::文體,時(shí)態(tài),人稱。:通過增加狀語,定語,連詞,使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。:拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤,語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確,連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?