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。提示詞語:Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題:Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見面。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。注意:1. 90詞左右。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。 support and our classmates39。7.上周,你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。注意:;,書寫工整、規(guī)范;。,騎電動車不安全;,騎電動車也快不起來。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文,而且要做到表達(dá)清楚,語句通順,意思連貫。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來,不要遺漏任何一個(gè),書寫時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。并注意上下文要語句貫通。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文中作者按照題目的要求,給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,要點(diǎn)全面。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。考點(diǎn):提綱類作文。假設(shè)你是李華,請根據(jù)下表提示,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā?. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄儯缓竺嫒畏謩e從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞剑鷦泳唧w,條理分明。【考點(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。但既然選擇了遠(yuǎn)方,便只顧風(fēng)雨兼程。請以Dream Chaser為題,談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫; ,字跡工整,詞數(shù)不少于80;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);。主要說明要有自己的目標(biāo),努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí),使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;正確面對困難,積極參加社會活動。承接文章開頭,句意完整,避免漢語式英語,敘述條理清晰。高分句型:It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.;there be句型;祈使句;need to do sth.。 寫作內(nèi)容:,享受大自然的美景,放松心情。 寫作要求: 詞左右,開頭部分已給出,但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。m sure I39。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫,主要使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語和句式,如:e to an end結(jié)束;on the way在途中;get close to nature親近大自然;volunteer to do something自愿做某事;help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事;take part in sth參加活動。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句,增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。