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happy with。 think about。此外文章使用了一些主從復(fù)合句,使得文章上下文邏輯關(guān)系更加合理。江蘇中考模擬)俗話說,國有國法,家有家規(guī)。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。要點(diǎn)提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠實(shí)守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息,杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國家庭。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。北京中考模擬)某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“我最喜歡的中華傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。提示詞語:festival,get together, enjoy,moon cakes,harvest time提示問題: What39。根據(jù)所提供的提示詞語可知,要求介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日:中秋節(jié)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。寫作時(shí),盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語把所給的提示問題回答清楚就行。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性。由and連接的并列句。句子中運(yùn)用了not only…… but also……,還有because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。北京中考模擬)假如你是李華,即將結(jié)束在美國的交換學(xué)習(xí),回國前你想給住家媽媽Sarah寫封感謝信,告訴她你什么時(shí)候回國,為什么感謝她,以及你的感受。文章可分為三段,第一段表明寫信的目的;第二段分析感謝的具體原因;第三段寫出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。亮點(diǎn)分析:表示感激的句型:I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.[高分句型一]I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記,當(dāng)我用英語和別人交流困難時(shí),你主動(dòng)提出幫助我。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣,這讓我想起了一句話:“天下之大, 家最美好。18.(請根據(jù)提示,為校報(bào)寫一篇有關(guān)的報(bào)道。In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________【答案】In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.If you are a sports fan, you can join in the basketball games. It can not only make you strong and healthy but also help you learn teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model making is a good choice. Students get to know more about science and develop interest in it. If you want to practice your spoken English, you can’t miss the English speeches. It can improve your abilities as well. There is also an art festival. Those who are good at singing and dancing can take an active part in it. You can show your talents and bee more confident.In my opinion, taking part in those activities helps us reduce our stress of study and every student enjoys a colourful school life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹學(xué)校在業(yè)余時(shí)間舉辦的各種各樣的活動(dòng)。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。此處all kinds of, choose from, join in, be interested in, know more about, want to do sth, be good at, take an active part in, help sb do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。山西農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬學(xué)校中考模擬)書面表達(dá)社會(huì)需要愛,時(shí)代呼喚愛。但很多人缺乏的不是感動(dòng),而是一種顯示感動(dòng)的勇氣。你從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么?讓我們一起分享吧!請根據(jù)以下提示要點(diǎn),寫一篇文章。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and pro