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題干解讀:這是一篇給材料作文,屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng):文章采取郵件格式,時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)為主。3. 高分亮點(diǎn):短語:school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。d better …;I39。8.為了吸引外國(guó)游客,杭州旅游網(wǎng)希望對(duì)杭州茶文化進(jìn)行宣傳。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains ...What’s the best place to learn about it?Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum ...Longjing Tea____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料類介紹型作文,所以我們必須要結(jié)合所給材料再適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語:one of...,...之一;green tea綠茶;be famous for...,因…而出名;keep healthy保持健康;be strict in sth對(duì)…嚴(yán)格;not only....but also...,不僅...而且...。It is+adj.(for sb.) to do sth. (對(duì)某人來說)做某事是怎樣的。Which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語從句。Where引導(dǎo)的定語從句?!癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)(結(jié)果見下表)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);(2)你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn),所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱,敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語和句式,如:do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康??键c(diǎn):材料作文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,對(duì)這一現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析并提出建議。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略