【正文】 Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，要求給英文報(bào)社寫一篇投稿，介紹對(duì)共享單車看法。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。使用一些好的句型和短語(yǔ)，注意正確的時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)以及謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式，還需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣的不同，讓整篇短文表達(dá)流暢。提示詞語(yǔ)： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章條理分明，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。句型：被動(dòng)句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)，主語(yǔ)從句。讀書可以成就更美好的自己，讓讀書伴隨我們成長(zhǎng)。要點(diǎn)提示：讀書的重要性1. 獲取知識(shí)，開闊眼界；2. 提升自我，增強(qiáng)自信……讀過的一本書或一首詩(shī)1. 作品內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介；2. 讀書感悟及對(duì)自己的影響。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名。參考詞匯：classic 經(jīng)典作品； open up one’s eyes 開闊眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 責(zé)任；cooperation 合作。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己讀過的一本書。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一，三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和過去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。10．書面表達(dá)假如你是英語(yǔ)俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購(gòu)的英文書籍。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動(dòng)情況，并說說網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書的好處。2介紹活動(dòng)的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購(gòu)其他的英文書。寫作要求：1不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。3字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。