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able, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學準備結伴出國旅行。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學們介紹。在寫作時,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤?,F(xiàn)在,請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。生詞提示:electric 討論結果25人表示同意35人不同意理由;?!敬鸢浮縇ast week, our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it, because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles, for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析:本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點可知,本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。觀點分明,談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。時態(tài)運用正確,書寫工整規(guī)范。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ,理由也很充分。9.書面表達4月28日,國家主席習近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國北京世界園藝博覽會開幕式,提出綠色發(fā)展“五個追求”(fivepoint initiative on green development),為全球生態(tài)文明建設貢獻中國智慧。參考要點: 1保護自然,如:綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然,如:讓天更藍山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與,從身邊小事做起,如:適度節(jié)約,拒絕浪費……;做到人與自然的和諧。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫。近日,又至畢業(yè)季,師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。短詩如下:My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項:,不得抄寫短詩原文:、意思連貫、符合情境。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher.She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart. She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours. She is kind and helpful, too. She always helps us with our study. She loves jogging, so she looks healthy. To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since 2001. She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death. I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future. I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher.I hope that you agree with me. Yours sincerely,Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一人稱。動筆前要認真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并可適當發(fā)揮。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩?!军c睛】點睛:首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結構是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求