【正文】 2008/06，2009/06, 2011/06 3）問(wèn)題解決型2009/12,2010/06,2010/12 1）、現(xiàn)象解釋型 以2008/12的作文為例進(jìn)行分析 2008年12月的作文Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Online Shopping，但也有不少問(wèn)題 觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立型模版第一段提出問(wèn)題模版： is a hot debate going on about____ many people are involved in the heated discussion about_____近年來(lái)，…... 論述兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)模版 for such a question, different people hold different believe______, While there is also an opposite voice, insist that , however, are voicing quite a loud pointed out maintain that_________, others argue people take it for granted that________..However,others 我的觀點(diǎn)模版 for me, I hold that firmly believe far as I?m concerned, my part,it , I believe the trend my perspective, my ：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Credit should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:，信用卡有哪些好處Credit Cards 3）問(wèn)題解決型、解決問(wèn)題 以2010/12的作文為例進(jìn)行分析 2010年12月的作文Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。”you39。ve done it hundreds of time.” You39。命題屬于依據(jù)材料來(lái)分析問(wèn)題的文章體裁，對(duì)于這樣的話題，我們可以借用三段式這一模式，首先依據(jù)背景材料來(lái)提出問(wèn)題，“從戒煙的問(wèn)題引出做任何事情都需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志，需要堅(jiān)持到底，不可半途而廢。也可以引用名人名言，如“where there is a will, there is a way”。提綱（1）闡述現(xiàn)象“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the ?ve done it hundreds of time.”，并進(jìn)行評(píng)論（2）舉例證明Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will（3）作者的觀點(diǎn)Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillEveryone tries to achieve success in his , someone firmly attains his goal while another ? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might Yatsen was such a of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing meanssteadiness in one39。想在寫(xiě)作考試中獲得成功，就必須首先了解四級(jí)考試的要求和評(píng)分規(guī)則。例文1：Some people think that certian(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤)numbers will bring good luck to such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky are also people who think that their success is related to certain , some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their believe in their own rather than“l(fā)ucky numbers”.They don39。s own business whether he believes in a certain number or most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite to the belief in numbers, it is their(前后指代不一致，應(yīng)改為his)personal ，根據(jù)15分制的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，這篇例文被評(píng)為14分，供全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師作為評(píng)分參考。簡(jiǎn)要地講，可分為以下三個(gè)部分：(一)英文議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)漢語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)的要求不是很高，如開(kāi)頭段應(yīng)該包括什么、論題句應(yīng)該在什么時(shí)候出現(xiàn)、文章的結(jié)尾是否必須總結(jié)全文等等。簡(jiǎn)而言之，英語(yǔ)議論文共有三大特點(diǎn)：觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開(kāi)頭；緊扣主題的結(jié)尾；有主題句并且銜接自然的中間段落。但在長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中，這樣的要求被很多學(xué)生以為是“老土”而得不到足夠的重視。另外，英語(yǔ)文章和漢語(yǔ)不同的是段落的主題句一定要放在段首，而不能按照中文的寫(xiě)作習(xí)慣放在段落的中間或者最后，在英文應(yīng)試寫(xiě)作中更加如此。例如，例文1中每一段的首句都簡(jiǎn)要地概括出了該段的主要內(nèi)容，換句話說(shuō)，每段的內(nèi)容都是根據(jù)首句來(lái)展開(kāi)的，其順序不能顛倒。)(二)中心統(tǒng)一在中心統(tǒng)一這個(gè)問(wèn)題上，英語(yǔ)議論文和漢語(yǔ)議論文的概念也有所不同。當(dāng)他們?cè)谖恼轮斜頁(yè)P(yáng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的時(shí)候，總要指出其不足；同樣，在批評(píng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的同時(shí)，也總不忘記指出其也有合理之處。換句話說(shuō)，如果作者告訴大家兩面都有道理也就等于說(shuō)兩面都沒(méi)有道理，因?yàn)樽x者在讀了文章之后仍舊不知道作者的看法是什么，以及自己在這種情況下到底該怎么做。以上面的例文1為例，如果作者的觀點(diǎn)是“幸運(yùn)數(shù)字是既有道理又無(wú)道理的”，這種觀點(diǎn)就無(wú)法讓人接受，因?yàn)樵谟⒄Z(yǔ)議論文中，這是典型的中心不統(tǒng)一大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作常用經(jīng)典句型1）主語(yǔ)從句It is mon knowledge that honesty is the best is wellknown that…It is selfevident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that 2）賓（表）語(yǔ)從句 We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his problem is not who will go, but who will ）定語(yǔ)從句（限定性和非限定性）As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…, There are many reasons why I want to study in your is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge ）狀語(yǔ)從句（時(shí)間，原因，地點(diǎn)，條件，讓步，轉(zhuǎn)折等）When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke bees a monster（怪物）which will devour the reason, there are still some problems with student use of ）分詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ) came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English ）倒裝句Only through these measures can we hope to solve the around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot ）被動(dòng)句Some measures should be taken to deal with the is said to have acplished a lot of great people believe that…（It is believed that…）8）設(shè)問(wèn)句Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?大學(xué)英語(yǔ)新四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作要求及高分策略(1)《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱》和《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程教學(xué)基本要求》都對(duì)培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力做了明確規(guī)定，即學(xué)生能在半小時(shí)內(nèi)完成120字左右的短文，包括書(shū)信等應(yīng)用問(wèn)題寫(xiě)作，要求文理基本通順，表達(dá)思想清楚，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。2005年1月的作文題目是要求學(xué)生以導(dǎo)游的身份寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，不僅包含歡迎辭(表態(tài))行程安排，(說(shuō)明)，而且包含安排的理由(說(shuō)理)。2006年1月是個(gè)競(jìng)選演說(shuō)，如果我當(dāng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席，我會(huì)給大家做點(diǎn)什么事情(說(shuō)明)。2006年6月24日新題型的作文是傳統(tǒng)的議論文形式，討論大學(xué)生選擇任課老師相關(guān)的問(wèn)題。2007年6月份是歡迎同學(xué)加入俱樂(lè)部的海報(bào)(應(yīng)用文)。此外，仔細(xì)研究06年6月24日以后的四級(jí)試卷，我們還可發(fā)現(xiàn)，新四級(jí)的寫(xiě)作題目與校園生活密切相關(guān)，學(xué)生普遍感覺(jué)親切，體裁包括兩篇議論文，一篇應(yīng)用文。盡管新四級(jí)前兩次都考查了議論文，但這并不能說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作的重心有任何偏移。新四級(jí)考試并沒(méi)有改變對(duì)寫(xiě)作的測(cè)試標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和要求，但在出題順序上卻做了明顯的調(diào)整：寫(xiě)作作為第一項(xiàng)考查的內(nèi)容，被提到新四級(jí)試卷的最開(kāi)頭，這令許多考生感覺(jué)不適應(yīng)，部分網(wǎng)友甚至認(rèn)為這是在折騰考生。在過(guò)去十多年的英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)中，筆者堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為：考生如果堅(jiān)持做到如下幾點(diǎn)，就不難在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi)寫(xiě)出一篇成功的英語(yǔ)作文。綜觀歷年的四級(jí)作文真題，變化趨勢(shì)是從三段論的議論文向?qū)嵱眯愿鼜?qiáng)的應(yīng)用文體，尤其是書(shū)信寫(xiě)作方面傾斜。列出并借助提綱進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作到了大學(xué)階段，學(xué)生還是非常善于思考的，他們不僅想象力非常豐富，晚上做夢(mèng)，還經(jīng)常daydream, 各有獨(dú)特的思維和寫(xiě)作思路。為此，在進(jìn)行四級(jí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)，考生一定要首先形成自己的觀點(diǎn)，之后合理運(yùn)用一些手段，如常用的有四種：陳述理由、舉例說(shuō)明、提供數(shù)據(jù)、下定義等，之后充分就此展開(kāi)論說(shuō)。寫(xiě)作之初，學(xué)生不必字斟句酌，只要脈絡(luò)清楚，具備輪廓就可以了。草擬過(guò)程的順利與否，在很大程度上取決于平時(shí)訓(xùn)練所達(dá)到的水平。這些想法都是錯(cuò)誤的。熟能生巧。2005年1月CET作文題目四級(jí)作文題目：A Campaign Speech 你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件（能力，性格，愛(ài)好）可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作，如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么？范文：Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ am junior in Chemical I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my tacher all give me a good am good at munication and I like to help , I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, am sure that I am qualified for this I bee the president, I will try my best to do will organize some siutable activities for will