【正文】 brought about big profits to the business, and also provided convenience to the , some beautiful ads will cheat the ‘Imported Color TV sets’ will have no picture not long after they have been leather shoes of famous brand will lose heels and the ‘Pressure cooker of high quality’ can bee very terrible to ‘Best medicine’ will even kill the , we must be careful and try not to be pare:The development of China’ economy has witnessed the fantastic booming of mercials in the of advertisers are full of are various advertisements in newspapers, and TV programs tend to give way to fascinating the buses, electric poles and people’s living quarters have bee the favorite places of everincreasing mercials indicate the modities in China have e to a fierce petitive promote sales, businesses endeavor to highlight all the possible advantages of their products in their tempting mercials for the , ads, a good strategy in mercial campaign, have created great profits for the business , consumers are benefited from the market information and convenience in , some eyecatch advertisements prove to be ‘Imported color TV sets’ will refuse to produce any pictures shortly after consumers have bought ‘Leather shoes of famous brand’ tend to lose heels in several days, which is really ‘Quality pressure cooker’ can, believe it or not, frighten the users to makes it worse is that some ‘Secret medicine’ will even kill the , we must be careful and not to be fooled into believing all that the ads tell us.(2)有用的句型記熟一些有用的句型并多加操練，無疑有助于意思的表達(dá)和寫作速度的提高。而恰恰就是這些句子，成為作文扣分的重點(diǎn)。有的因?yàn)殡S意亂打標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，叫人看半天也不知句子應(yīng)從哪兒開始，哪兒完結(jié)。例如：The First Day I Went to CollegeI still remember the first day when I went to was a sunny found that everything was fresh to the freshmen were excited, and I was very excited, I was studying at high school, I dreamed of being a college I looked art the modern teaching buildings and the grand library, I could hardly believe that my dream had e was a good would use the opportunity to learn a great deal of believed that the knowledge I was going to learn would be useful for my future career and the I knew that I would e across great challenges in ing had to learn how to overe the difficulties in my study and life at was really a turning point in my knew that the study at college would be one of the most valuable experiences for a was determined to seize every opportunity and take full advantage of the things which the university would offer to would prove myself a worthy college would surely live up to the expectation of my parents and our great First Day I Went to CollegeI still remember the first day when I went to was a sunny seemed fresh to the other freshmen, I was very studying at high school, I dreamed of being a college at the modern teaching buildings and the grand library, I could hardly believe that my dream had e was a good opportunity, an opportunity for me to learn a great deal of knowledge useful for my future career and the in ing days I would also e across great had to learn how to overe the difficulties in my study and life at was a turning point in my at college would be one of the most valuable experiences for a I could seize every opportunity and take full advantage of what the university would offer to me, I would prove myself a worthy college student and live up to the expectations of my parents