【正文】 rom poor families or have financial difficulties, they want to make money for themselves and relieve the burden of their addition, some students expect to be associated with society by working as , some people think that college students should make good use of their time in study, but not wasting their valuable time as for me, it is not a bad thing for college students to be tutored in their spare time as long as they are able to arrange their time ：第一段：根據(jù)提示,開門見山提出主題：大學(xué)生做家教流行。第二段：對問題做簡單分析。第三段：說明幫助所起的作用以及再次感謝。第一篇：改寫作文Test 1Part IWriting:A Letter of GratitudeDear Mary,Many thanks to you for your timely help with my preparations for the I only wanted to ask you for some advice on the ing test, as you were so good at to my surprise, you gave more help to me than I had ever not only gave me some suggestions but also showed me how I could arrange my time and what I should do in each month before the , you lent me the book I needed very much when you learned that I had not yet got was really kind and considerate of unreserved help enabled me to make efficient preparations and at last encouraged me to pass the really owe all my success to I would like to extend my heartfelt gratitude trulySally寫作思路提示：第一段：開門見山表達(dá)謝意。第二段：稍加說明感謝原因，并舉例說明具體幫助。Test 2Part IWriting:Why Do People Keep Pets?With the increasing improvement of their life, many people are wild about keeping , it is very mon that we see people taking a walk leisurely with their dear pets along the streets towards social gatherings people who like keeping pets exchange their experience on taking care of is notsurprised if a pet costs as high as one’s annual , why do people keep pets?The answer to this problem involves many , pets make us happy and far from lonely as human , pets give us a sense of being important and needed because they depend on us for home, food and , a pet in a family keeps us in touch with the more natural, animal , it is my belief that some problems can’t be ignored since the growing number of pets may leads to hygiene many public places pets should be forbidden to enter because they are likely to spread disease and interfere with other should always keep our environment clean at any ：第一段：根據(jù)提示簡單說明養(yǎng)寵物的現(xiàn)象，提出問題。第三段：簡述自己的看法。第二段：然后簡述其原因, 對大學(xué)生做家教的利弊做簡單分析。Test 4Part IWriting:Where There is Will，There is WayThis proverb means that if you are really determined to do something, you will overe any difficulties until you eventually one wants to succeed in doing something, he must obtain great courage to face and overe any difficulties he encounters on his way to achieve the should learn to strengthen his will and can’t allow failures to defeat successful people home and abroad have achieved amazing achievements just because they have such ’s take English study for example , many people want to learn English well, but the result is usually opposite to their wish just because those people are lack of strong will to win through obstacles and to keep learning English , those who are really determined to learn English well are never afraid of difficulties in learning English and always persist in learning , they can finally succeed in learning English well and really master a foreign ：。while the government should provide college graduates with more vocational opportunities, better working conditions and decent “according to”對圖表簡單進(jìn)行敘述，在核心段用“one reason is that； secondly；on the other hand”進(jìn)行詳細(xì)論證。