【英語考試托福】tpo3獨立寫作范文共4頁-在線瀏覽
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【正文】 s essay, the level of vocabulary is not as sophisticated as would be typical in a toprated essay, but there is some very good grammatical plexity displayed and vocabulary is used accuratelySample Response 2（本篇范文為博主對考生習(xí)作的修訂，主要是語言方面的修改潤色）博主空閑時間有償提供托福/雅思/GRE/SAT等作文的詳細(xì)批改服務(wù)，詳情可聯(lián)系：1223317581，必回！The importance of old friends in reducing stress cannot be exaggerated. Older friends have longer relationships with us。In other situations, old friends simply cannot help, and we need new friends to lend a hand. New friends can mean a lot in emergencies. In an accident, for instance, an old friend who is far away from you cannot offer any help. In such situations, new friends often play a crucial role in helping us overe difficulties. After my cousin was in a car accident, his friends at his new pany gave him a lot of help. Without the help of his new friends, I doubt that he would have recovered as well as he did.————附考生習(xí)作原稿——————In the first place, the importance of old friends to reducing our stress can never be exaggerated. Old friends usually have long relationship with us. They know us well and know our weakness better than our new friends. When we e across some obstacles in our lives, it is the longterm friends old friends who could give us proper suggestions and help us get through the problems. Our new friends sometime just could not give adequate advices for us because they could not know our situation properly. We need time to know each other. For example, last week I faced a dilemma which was about whether accepted a job offer that was very promising but in another city. All my new friends in my current pany encouraged me to take the offer because they thought the future of this job was well. However, one of my old friends discouraged me to do that because he knew the healthy condition of my mom was poor, and she need someone to take care of her. I think his suggest was proper for me.Why, I just wonder, do some people just emphasis the role of one kind friend, especially the old friends. Maybe satisfied with idea that old friends are more important are those who hold the opinion that the relationship between old friends and us is tighter. But as modern people, I think we should car
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