全國(guó)高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文賞析-在線瀏覽
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【正文】 hool usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua [名師點(diǎn)評(píng)] 這篇文章的特點(diǎn)還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感。 【安徽卷】【試題回放】 假如你是李華，美國(guó)一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下： l 表示贊成。 l 簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由?！ ? 2. 新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好?！ ?. 參考欄目：欄目—column Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that. Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things. Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine! Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】 這是一篇滿分作文。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語(yǔ)，一些詞語(yǔ)的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測(cè)此人或者是家人可能有過(guò)國(guó)外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語(yǔ)，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來(lái)的。t wait to 簡(jiǎn)直是perfect! 況且文章中沒(méi)有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書寫還是語(yǔ)法。二. 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為作文添彩 【北京卷】 【試題回放】情景作文 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)等較好的句式表達(dá)?？忌攸c(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國(guó)人，要體會(huì)到西式刀叉對(duì)中式食物的矛盾性。三. 復(fù)合句為寫作增色 【全國(guó)卷】 【試題回放】 假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過(guò)有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)
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