【正文】 同位語句子同位語有兩種功能:歸納和解釋. 例如:a) Another ingredient of courtesy is empathy, a quality that enables a person to see into the mind or heart of someone else.b) But whatever sad episodes exist in our past, we must hold a positive view of our history, a history that has been the story of hopes fulfilled and dreams made into reality.3) 平行排比句恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂镁渥拥钠叫信疟?能使文章顯得更生動,更有力.. Our strength makes him strong。 our courage makes him a hero.4) 后置修飾句運(yùn)用后置修飾語可以使文章的表達(dá)更簡潔.. There is an almost infinite variety of magazines available to satisfy the rich variety of interests and tastes.5) 插入語在正常的句子中插入某些成分,也會給句子帶來變化.. At the end of the nineteenth and the beginning of this century, a man had to be aggressive and ambitioustoday he has to social and tolerantin order to be attractive “package”.6) 被動句在主動句占絕大多數(shù)的情況下,被動句能帶來一些變化.. However, very little control can be exercised over the media used to generate information that es to you from the outside.7) 倒裝句倒裝句不僅帶來句型的豐富,而且在句子的連貫上,平衡上也有一定的作用.. From that science will e the realization that despite technology, man dose not exercise dominion over nature.8) 名詞化句子正式文體中,名詞化句子的運(yùn)用顯得語言表達(dá)更成熟.. Heavy exposure to TV will interfere with one’s studies. (Watching too much TV will affect your studies.)9) 運(yùn)用破折號運(yùn)用破折號不僅對句子變化有幫助,而且有強(qiáng)調(diào)的作用.1． 時(shí)態(tài)方面的錯誤寫議論文一般用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。2． 主謂，人稱等違反一致性方面的錯誤寫一個句子，乃至一篇文章里人稱始終要保持一致，不能一會兒用第三人稱，一會兒又用第一人稱。b) To participate in class discussion, a lot of books have to be read.不定式短語的邏輯主語決不是o lot of books，為了把邏輯關(guān)系表達(dá)清楚，要么把不定式短語改成 If one wants to participate in class discussion，要么把主句改成you have to read a lot of books。前面用ing 形式，最后一個用動詞原形 read是不妥的， 為了和 do shopping, do banking保持結(jié)構(gòu)上平行，接下來的一個內(nèi)容要用 reading。后半句宜改為：It is also beneficial to the development of our analytical skills。 其實(shí)只要把其中的一個名詞變成單數(shù)，用 he和 they 分別代不同的名詞就清楚了。作者知道 it指人們的努力， 但 effort這個詞前面沒有出現(xiàn)過，就不能用it，所以要把 it改成 the effort。many, a great number of, another, few等只能與可數(shù)名詞配用。7． 冠詞方面的錯誤a) Book knowledge is important, but we should also learn something in the society.b) When I was in the high school, I always had a beautiful picture of the college life.在沒有特指意義時(shí)，不能用表示特指的定冠詞The。c) There is a lot of discussion in the class.表示上課，用手，走路，上學(xué)，住院等都不用定冠詞：In class, by hand, on foot, go to college, at hospital。b) There are many ways to contact with society. For example, joining clubs, take part time jobs and help the poor.For example 引出的應(yīng)是句子：For example we may join clubs, take part time jobs and help the poor. 而Such as引出的只能是詞或詞組，不能獨(dú)立成句： Such as joining clubs, taking part time jobs and helping the poor.c) Unlike the movie, TV shows on continuously, and doesn’t need to pay any extra money.Doesn’t need to pay any extra money的主語是什么？ 顯然不是TV。將主語省去，但英語一定要有明顯的主語，所以在 doesn’t need to pay any extra money 前要加上one。但這是假主語，因?yàn)?acquire knowledge的主語必須是人。但英語不行，一定要有邏輯主謂關(guān)系。所以這一句可以是The city is so seriously polluted that people have no fresh air to breathe now. 或As the city is seriously polluted, people have no fresh air to breathe now.10。英語中能和Knowledge搭配的不是 learn/study而是 obtain, acquire, gain等。打開電腦蓋子，只能看到芯片，怎么是 everything in the world ，這里應(yīng)用turn on。同時(shí) People began to eat more vice food搭配也不對。而副總統(tǒng)，副經(jīng)理，副教授，副作用分別是 vice president, assistant managers, associate professors, side effects，一定要牢記。詞語方面的錯誤c) After four years, we all graduated from college and entered society.過去時(shí)里表示四年后，應(yīng)用Four years later，而不是 after fore years，用于表示將來的四年后，也不用 after，而是用介詞 in: We will all graduate in four years.d) The puter like TV, it has both advantages and disadvantages.表示“像”，Like是介詞，這里誤用為動詞，應(yīng)是： Like TV, the puter has both advantages and ，Obviously, our country would stop develop if no electricity，這里 develop 的正確用法應(yīng)是動名詞developing，而 no 也不是動詞，表示沒有，英語的動詞是There is not(no)或 have not。同樣，People try to find a solution to solve the problem去掉 s