【正文】 3. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語(yǔ)，一些詞語(yǔ)的大膽使用，這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語(yǔ)，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。t wait to 簡(jiǎn)直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書寫還是語(yǔ)法。贊同反對(duì)1．重建該園輝煌景象1．保留原樣更為合理2．中華文明具體體現(xiàn)2．警示人們不忘過去3．旅游新景點(diǎn)3．其他建筑同樣反映中華文化（如故宮、頤和園等），重建并非必須4．如部分恢復(fù)，可與廢墟對(duì)照，讓人們記住歷史4．破壞該地生態(tài)環(huán)境注意：1．詞數(shù)：150左右 2．標(biāo)題、開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：故宮the Palace Museum。最近，你們班同學(xué)就“地球一小時(shí)”活動(dòng)展開了一場(chǎng)熱烈盼討論。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給《中學(xué)英語(yǔ)報(bào)》主編寫一封信，介紹你們班的討論結(jié)果并闡明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。參考詞匯：做秀一show不便一inconvenienceDear Editor，Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour．_______________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour．Different students have different opinions about this activity．About 60% of the students are in favor of it． As we all know ,global warming is a big problem in the world． Earth Hour can raise people’s awareness of global warming． Besides, turning off lights for an hour is energysaving． Only by working together can we make our earth a better place to live in．However , about 40% of the students say this activity is not very meaningful． They think it is only a show and that it doesn’t make much difference． What’s more, turning off lights for an hour may cause inconvenience to people’s life, work and study．In my opinion, this activity is of great importance． But one activity alone is not enough if we want to save energy and protect our earth． Let’s act through our daytoday habits．圖表分析類(4)受某英文報(bào)的委托，你最近對(duì)高中生的英語(yǔ)閱讀興趣做了一次調(diào)查。短文的標(biāo)題及首句已為你寫好。也可根據(jù)提示寫為議論文。第二段：緊扣主題，根據(jù)圖表比較分析原因，論證結(jié)論。常用句式：1. As can be seen from the chart，...　As is shown in the chart，...2. The chart shows that about 60 percent of students want to go to college...3. From the graph/data/results/information above，it can be seen/concluded/show/estimated... graph shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... with...，the number of the students of...練習(xí)篇目最近，你參加了高三年級(jí)組織的“你最重視哪科作業(yè)”的調(diào)查，結(jié)果見下面的餅狀圖。注意：1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好。Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students. The results are as follows:最重視各科作業(yè)的學(xué)生比例示意圖語(yǔ)文7%數(shù)學(xué)54%英語(yǔ)18%其它學(xué)科21%Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.The results are as follows: more than half of the students, about 54%, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important. Meanwhile, English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants, and the other subjects attract the attention of 21% of the students.There is a profound difference between math and Chinese. Without doubt, some students hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense of achievement in it. However, each subject has its unique charm and they are of the same value. Therefore, I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.漫畫類（5）開放作文 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。In an English speech petition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.“開放作文”的命題方式是讓考生根據(jù)一幅圖畫，在描述圖畫信息之余，發(fā)揮自己的想象，展開簡(jiǎn)單的議論。開放作文有明顯的套路可循。相應(yīng)地，你只需要寫兩個(gè)段落，一段是“描述段”，另一段是“議論段”。第二段用來寫這幅圖畫說明了什么問題。From the picture I can see a pair of proud passes and a hardworking pencil. The passes are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort.I