【正文】 ss discoveries. It is only when one can make with them a mosaic that we can see that they may form a picture TOEFL IBT 官方滿(mǎn)分范文 ? If our friend had worn a newlypurchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked us if it was a worthy buy, would we freely express our opinion that we would never seen a dress as the one she wearing and just spoiled her birthday? Inarguably, hiding the truth in some situation can be quite handy indeed. 你是豬 ? 正常： You are a pig。 ? GRE癥前期： It would not be unjustifiable to claim that you resemble a pig not only superficially but also intrinsically。 ) ? GRE癥后期： You are porcine/swinish/hoggish。 ) 獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作攻略 ? 獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? 獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作的寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)言 ? 獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作構(gòu)思與結(jié)構(gòu) ? 獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾、主題句、發(fā)展寫(xiě)法 優(yōu)秀的女人 ? 優(yōu)秀的女人 1. 做人要大氣 2. 做事要有分寸 3. 做事要善始善終 ? 優(yōu)秀的文章 1. 字?jǐn)?shù) 2. 分段 3. 開(kāi)頭段和檢查 官方的說(shuō)法是：“ An effective response is typically about 300 words long. If you write fewer than 300 words， you may still receive a top score， but experience has shown that shorter responses typically do not demonstrate the development of ideas needed to earn a score of 5.‖。 扣題 這個(gè)指主旨 充實(shí) 這個(gè)指素材 嚴(yán)密 這個(gè)指論證 耐看 這個(gè)指詞句和語(yǔ)法 獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? effectively: in a way that produces the intended result or a successful result ? anized: arranged or planned in a particular order or structure ? developed: to make an idea clearer by explaining it further ? explanation: a statement, fact or situation that tells you why a reason given for something ? unity: the state of looking or being plete in a natural and pleasing way ? progression: the process of developing gradually from one stage to another 獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? coherence:of different ideas,arguments,sentences to have a clear logical connection so that together they make a whole ? consistent:always behaving in the same way ,or having the same opinions standard Effectively addresses the topic and task 有效的回答了題目和任務(wù) ? Topic ? 題目 ? In the modern society, the ability to speak well is more important than the ability to write well. ? Task ? 任務(wù) ? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? ? Which do you prefer? （機(jī)經(jīng)中很少出現(xiàn)） ? Why do you think?（機(jī)經(jīng)中不再出現(xiàn)） ? 例 1： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the modern society, the ability to speak well is more important than the ability to write well. ? Address the topic: For most people, speaking ability is more important than writing ability. ? Fail to address the topic： Speaking ability plays a vital role in a person’s success. ? 不能隨意增加或者刪減題目的內(nèi)容 ? 例 1： Some one prefer to ask their friends for advice when they met troubles, others prefer to ask their parents for advice. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. ? Address the topic: I prefer to ask my parents for advice/ I prefer to ask my friends for advice. ? Fail to address the topic： I prefer to ask a counselor for advice. Wellanized 良好的組織 ? 整體 wellanized。 ? 段內(nèi) wellanized。 45 Scoring Rubrics ? wellanized 良好的組織 Does easierprepared food improve the way people live? Another reason I held for this opinion can been easily seen. Now people in growing numbers are unhealthy, especially among children. What make this e so far? Undoubtly short order is the majority of reasons. The significance of health cannot be emphsized too much. Short order makes people get fatter, and it threat our heath strictly. It also brought on a fact that the majority of people are not in good condition. Proper measures must be taken to limit this situation. Welldeveloped ? 三重意義 ? Thesis statement得到 welldeveloped，意味著 body paragraph( sub point)的數(shù)量不能過(guò)少 ? 每個(gè) topic sentence得到充分展開(kāi)。經(jīng)驗(yàn)表明，主要段落字?jǐn)?shù)不低于 150字。 by reading geography, we know the earth surface, forms, physical features and so on。d better to keep pany with the true friends. ? As friends are both helpful and disastrous, it is better to keep pany with the true friends who are helpful, encouraging and loyal, but to avoid those who are mean, stingy and treacherous. Unity ? Introduction、 Body、 Conclusion必須完整 ? 每個(gè) body paragraph支持 thesis statement ? 每個(gè) body paragraph中的 sentences支持 topic sentence Progression ? Body paragraphs使用 transitional words和repetition ? Body paragraphs中從抽象（ topic sentence）到具體（ exemplification） Coherence ? 正確使用代詞 行文更加流暢 ? 人稱(chēng)代詞 ? 指示代詞 ? 關(guān)系代詞 ? A temple sat on a hill where lived an old monk. unity, progression, coherence ? In any relationship of mine， I would wish that first of all，the person I am dealing with is honest. Even though he/she thinks that he/she did something wrong that I wouldn’t like，he/she’d better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else， that’d be much more unpleasant. In that case how can I ever believe or trust that person again? How can I ever believe that this person has enough confidence in me to five him/her and carry on with the relationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore， if the person doesn’t think I can handle the truth， there is no point to continuing that relationship. appropriate word choice ?使用搭配詞典和語(yǔ)料庫(kù)。 ?符合語(yǔ)境和習(xí)慣用法。 A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good. B: The bathroom and the kitchen are wellfurnished. ? 好好學(xué)習(xí) ? 好好孝敬父母 ? 好好對(duì)女朋友 ? 好好對(duì)男朋友 ? 好工作 ? 好學(xué)校 ―一些人認(rèn)為” ——Some ? 無(wú)數(shù)的 ? numerous ? myriad (a myriad of) ―一些人認(rèn)為” ——people ? 公眾 ? the public ? 在周末我們做很多作業(yè)。s life ? 剝奪機(jī)會(huì) /權(quán)力： deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity ? 取代就的方式： substitute for/take the place of the old way ? 采取措施： take effective steps/measures to ? 控制我們的環(huán)境： take increasing control over our own environment ? 躲避危險(xiǎn) /挑戰(zhàn)： run away