【正文】 n many cases though, the same idea is expressed differently. Questions 33 35 are based on the passage you have just heard. 33. Why are proverbs so important? 34. According to the speaker what happens to some proverbs with the passage of time? 35 What do we learn from the study of proverbs from around the world? Section C Compound Dictation Our lives are woven together. As much as I enjoy my own pany, I no longer imagine I can get through a single day much less all my life pletely on my own. Even if I am on vacation in the mountains, I am eating food someone else has grown, living in a house someone else has built, wearing clothes someone else has sewn from cloth woven by others, using electricity someone else is distributing to my house. Evidence of interdependence is everywhere。 第三段作者進(jìn)一步給出了自己的觀點(diǎn)，告訴大家如何避免陷入這種兩難境地：首要條件即需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志和長(zhǎng)期的堅(jiān)持。 范文開(kāi)頭第一句即一針見(jiàn)血地對(duì)上述幽默性話(huà)語(yǔ)做出總結(jié)性概括，即戒煙看似簡(jiǎn)單實(shí)則很難，隨后指出該話(huà)語(yǔ)本質(zhì)上是一個(gè)悖論 ，并且以一個(gè) “水滴石穿 ”的俗語(yǔ)來(lái)指出困難所在，這句也是本文的一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，體現(xiàn)作者在西方俗語(yǔ)方面豐富的知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備。 高分版 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As we have read from above, quittingsmoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. There is something provoking and interesting in this paradox, just because sword does not wear the stone as dripping water does. The ability to do something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, but in a long run, a lifetime maybe, things turn out to be quite the opposite. Also, as is often the case, one may have obtained all the tools and opportunities to achieve something, but in the end they still fail due to the will shortage. So how could we avoid the dilemma? Here is the prime condition of success: will and perseverance. Concentrate you energy, thought and mind exclusively on the business in which you are engaged, hang on in there and be patient, for, as Emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of your ultimate success but yourself. 點(diǎn)評(píng)： 本次四級(jí)作文探討的話(huà)題是成功與毅力之間的關(guān)系，話(huà)題不算新，一般考生對(duì)此都比較熟悉，所以對(duì)考生來(lái)說(shuō)難度不大。 在論述上，敘述略顯羅嗦。 但一些重復(fù)表達(dá)（如第二段和第三段中的 weak will）顯得單調(diào)，可用 shaky ones, weakwilled persons， the strongwilled 等靈活表達(dá)。本文先點(diǎn)題指出 “堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志 ”的重要性；第二段從反面舉例闡述 ——具體描寫(xiě)了意志不堅(jiān)定者的心理活動(dòng)，闡述為什么會(huì)戒煙失??；最后從戒煙延伸到生活中的其他事情，并復(fù)述堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志的內(nèi)涵，點(diǎn)題收尾。細(xì)看題目說(shuō)明中給出了提示，要求考生結(jié)合戒煙屢次不成功的幽 默引語(yǔ)對(duì)該話(huà)題進(jìn)行分析闡述。2022 年 12 月英語(yǔ)四級(jí) 真題及答案 1 作文真題、范文及點(diǎn)評(píng) Nothing Scucceeds Without a Strong Willby menting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the eaiest thing in the world. I39。va done it hundreds of times. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Part I Writing Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Nothing runs smoothly in our life. To achieve things successfully, a strong will is essential. Life is like a Marathon. Many people can’t get to the terminal. This is not because they are lack of vitality but because their will of success is not strong enough. To take quitting smoking as an example, some regard it as a piece of cake. They make up their minds to quit it in the morning, but in the evening they feel that the smell of cigarettes is tempting. Their throats are sore, their mouths are thirsty, and their hands are shaking. After the painful mental struggle, they tell themselves that “One cigarette is enough. Just take one, and the next day I will quit it.” By doing this, they surrender to their weak will. In the end, they have quitted smoking “a hundred times”, but in no time they succeed. Just like quitting smoking, nothing succeeds without a strong will. To be successful in one’s life, a strong will means that you know where you go and you will persist on the road you choose. Undoubtedly success belongs to those who overe their weak will and who hang in there until the last minute 文章點(diǎn)評(píng)： 本文屬于話(huà)題類(lèi)作文，只看題目 “Nothing Succeeds without a strong will”考生會(huì)覺(jué)得比較抽象，難以下手。 總體來(lái)說(shuō)，這是一篇 “中等偏上 ”的考生作文。 總體上來(lái)看，文章思路清晰，采用了生動(dòng)的比喻和形象的心理描寫(xiě)，語(yǔ)言流暢，用語(yǔ)地道。在備考中，多積累不同表達(dá)，相信會(huì)寫(xiě)出更生動(dòng)的文章。第二段心理描寫(xiě)過(guò)多，雖然流暢生動(dòng)，但卻使這篇考場(chǎng)作文超過(guò)了規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)，反而成為失分點(diǎn)，這一點(diǎn)要引以為戒。寫(xiě)好這篇作文，需要抓住兩點(diǎn)，一是緊跟題目要求，即對(duì)上述幽默性的話(huà)語(yǔ)做出評(píng)論，二是在評(píng)論的基礎(chǔ)上要亮出自己的觀點(diǎn)。 第二段作者則進(jìn)一步深入分析該話(huà)語(yǔ)，指出做某事在短期看來(lái)很容易，長(zhǎng)期來(lái)看，恰恰相反，人們做事的結(jié)果也因此總是失敗，原因則在最后一句點(diǎn)出：缺乏毅力。最后再以艾默生的一句名言 “沒(méi)人能夠騙你遠(yuǎn)離你最終的成功，除非你自己承認(rèn)失敗 ”來(lái)總結(jié)全文，切中主題，鏗鏘有力。 we are on this journey together. As I was growing up, I remember being carefully taught that independence not interdependence was everything. “Make your own way”,” Stand on your own two feet” or my mother’s favorite remark when I was facetoface with consequences of some action: Now that you’ve made your bed, lie on it. Total independence is a dominant thing in our culture. I imagine that what my parents were trying to teach me was to take responsibilities for my actions and my choices. But the teaching was shaped by our cultural imagines. And instead, I grew up believing that I was supposed to be totally independent and consequently became very reluctant to ask for help. I would do almost anything not to be a burden, and not require any help from anybody. 聽(tīng)力答案： 11. ^^ask the staff ^^ TV program13.^^^^^^ missing her flight a restaurant 15^^^^of the woman 16.^^^^alowrent apartment 17.^^^otpic more focuse 18,they didnot 19,he likes 20,the cold 21 depressing 22they work 23,french 24,careers 25,its26 the art of 27to enhance 28how listeners 29 directing 30twoofhis employee 31advancement 32sheis peting 33The help wording 36pany 37single 38pletely39vacation 40built 41ecectricity42 evidence 43journey 本次 聽(tīng)力考試長(zhǎng)對(duì)話(huà)第一篇難度略低與以往水平，話(huà)題關(guān)于瑞典的天氣和生活方式，對(duì)話(huà)以 man speaker 提供信息為主， woman speaker 穿針引線，所以大家集中精力聽(tīng) man speaker 的話(huà)即可。接下來(lái)討論了不同季節(jié)的日光長(zhǎng)度，圣誕節(jié)期間每天只有 1 小時(shí)光照，而五月到七月，直到午夜還有還有日照，所以瑞典享有 “The Land of Midnight Sun”的美譽(yù)。他們的生活方式用原文中的一句話(huà)來(lái)概述就是 “They like to work hard, but play hard too.”。第 20 題 : “What do Swedish people plain about when they visit England in winter?”，答 案出現(xiàn)在文中，瑞典人拜訪英國(guó)會(huì)抱怨英國(guó)人的室內(nèi)很冷。 考場(chǎng)上，大家只要能 follow the man speaker’s track，抓住細(xì)節(jié)，就一定會(huì)找出答案。從對(duì)話(huà)的語(yǔ)氣中可以猜出是學(xué)妹在請(qǐng)教