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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我比起小時候有了哪些變化。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用?!军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少?;厩闆r張陽,陽光中學(xué)九年級二班學(xué)生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量,以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。如:…….(舉1例)要求:1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫; 2)必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; 3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(短文的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如like reading,more than,all kinds of,spend time doing,enjoy doing,the number of,twice a year,be the chief engineer of等?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。注意:1. 詞數(shù)。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。、短語、句型。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。用的短語、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點。做到:要點要全,表達要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。注意事項:,條理清楚,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 狀況水污染,大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境(至少兩條)...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place