【正文】 s，as well等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。4． 最近一份學(xué)生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學(xué)生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化?，F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學(xué)生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預(yù)防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進行體育活動2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習(xí)慣你的觀點… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作，人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。（I think ???；try one39。常用的重點句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。要點包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我比起小時候有了哪些變化。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。2在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。一例）。2在表格中有非常詳細的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達出來。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。同時注意表達的準確性，尤其是表格中的第五項和第六項內(nèi)容。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點。寫作時注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化，并給出建議。寫作時應(yīng)合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool a