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Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強(qiáng)調(diào))the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間,大明沒有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。【詳解】首先,第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn),大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法,不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任,對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外,還需要再次保證永不再犯。整篇文章在謀篇布局上,比較嚴(yán)密。4.書面表達(dá)初中即將畢業(yè),同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。請根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 普遍存在的壓力:同學(xué)關(guān)系;考試2. 我過去的壓力:父母的期望;學(xué)習(xí)3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果;……要求:1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名;2. 詞數(shù)80左右,短文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can39。 I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.審題可知,文章中應(yīng)主要包括以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容:首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象;然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力;最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會出發(fā),選取生活中常見的場景進(jìn)行介紹。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,這樣的句式表達(dá)簡潔、明了,易于掌握。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。短文有如下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn):首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目中要求的所有信息,且層次清晰,文章分成了四段,每一段的中心話題也很明確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,敘述清晰、簡潔。短文中使用了豐富的句式,如Some students can39。5.書面表達(dá)假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕ǎ_頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。6.寫作81. 春天,許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動。提示:1)What’s the benefit (好處) of outdoor activities? (12 opinions)2)Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? (12 examples)3)What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? (At least 1 suggestion)要求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù);4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作亮點(diǎn):本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練、要點(diǎn)齊全。7.4月23日是“世界讀書日”,你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書,讀好書”的活動。內(nèi)容包括:應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書,以及讀書的意義。例文點(diǎn)評:例文采用的是一段式,寫的是閱讀的好處,時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述倡議時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。要求:1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)