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ourite outdoor activity? How and why? (12 examples)3)What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? (At least 1 suggestion)要求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右,開頭已給出,不計入詞數(shù);4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練、要點齊全。內(nèi)容包括:應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書,以及讀書的意義。句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。要求:1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫:詞數(shù):100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實姓名。作文要包含材料上的所有信息,通過介紹這個故事,發(fā)表看法或者觀點。近日,又至畢業(yè)季,師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher.She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart. She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours. She is kind and helpful, too. She always helps us with our study. She loves jogging, so she looks healthy. To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since 2001. She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death. I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future. I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher.I hope that you agree with me. Yours sincerely,Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。【點睛】點睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略