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p others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題,寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。審題可知,這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài),并注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。表格中有非常具體的提示,但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語(yǔ),應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話,并用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,用完整的句子表達(dá)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫、自然。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,有層次、有條理。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語(yǔ),如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。一直以來(lái),同學(xué)們對(duì)作業(yè)持有不同的觀點(diǎn)。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned;Practice makes prefect;...Take up too much time;Make us less interested in studying;...Your opinion:要求:1.80詞以上。【答案】Dear students,I39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析:審題之后能明白寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是要寫(xiě)出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確,注意正確使用連詞,借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來(lái)佐證自己的觀點(diǎn)。其次,開(kāi)始具體陳述觀點(diǎn),陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例,相關(guān)用到的短語(yǔ)有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難,review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí),think over the difficulties來(lái)回思考難點(diǎn),Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。最后可以用說(shuō)理的方式來(lái)介紹做作業(yè)的必要性,例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能,在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn),就是說(shuō)作業(yè)也要有變化性,要豐富多彩,體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考,總體來(lái)說(shuō)出色地完成了既定的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。要求:1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛(ài)物品的名字;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。A(n) _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A(n) toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫(xiě)作分析:這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開(kāi)描述,要求是進(jìn)行描述,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?,以及它存在的意義。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍?zhuān)枋鐾婢邩尩臅r(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充