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【正文】 hted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。s best to do sth.）。4． 寫(xiě)作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。3. 提出至少2條建議。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。交通：新的飛機(jī)場(chǎng)已投入使用多年。將來(lái)希望……（兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，并對(duì)將來(lái)提出兩點(diǎn)希望。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開(kāi)想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來(lái)，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這
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