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st of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信,邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游,題目中列出了文章的提綱,審題可知,短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述:首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置;然后介紹來這里最好的時(shí)候;接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化,并給出建議。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容,分清主次,并注意上下文的連貫。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu),易于掌握,不容易出錯(cuò)?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游,并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請,然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等,并提出了建議。第二,短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。假如你是李華,請你寫一封倡議書,向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號召。提示詞語:story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭,寫出對學(xué)生的倡議。高分亮點(diǎn):短語:Firstly;Secondly;Finally;a good way to do sth;broaden our knowledge and horizon。6.中央電視臺《經(jīng)典詠流傳》節(jié)目的播出,再次激發(fā)了人們對經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品的閱讀熱情。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示,以“Growing up with Reading”為題寫一篇英語短文介紹你曾經(jīng)讀過的一本書或—首詩,并建議大家多讀書,讀好書。多讀書,讀好書1. 利用閑暇時(shí)間多讀書,養(yǎng)成讀書的好習(xí)慣;2. 多讀經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品……注意:1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。3. 詞數(shù):80100(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. 【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books