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line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文?!驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見,寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示,確定文章中心。文章要有層次、流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分三段寫:贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語(yǔ),句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。conditions)差5生活越來(lái)越好,環(huán)境(environment)越來(lái)越舒適.6你的感想…(寫兩到三句)Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years,great changes have taken place in our hometown. 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。而I think it39。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn),飽受贊譽(yù)?!澳愕挠^點(diǎn)”一欄用23句話展開合理想象,做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文,要求給英文報(bào)社寫一篇投稿,介紹對(duì)共享單車看法。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題,深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。使用一些好的句型和短語(yǔ),注意正確的時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)以及謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式,還需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣的不同,讓整篇短文表達(dá)流暢。提示詞語(yǔ): Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Sum