【正文】 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。3. 提出至少2條建議。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學(xué)生家長的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。 要求：、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整；、校名和地名等信息；，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)?！澳愕挠^點(diǎn)”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。5．書面表達(dá)以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。要求：?！敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語將這些內(nèi)容完整地?cái)⑹龀鰜?，并簡單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。通過分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。還需注意的是英語表達(dá)和漢語的習(xí)慣不同，不能逐詞去翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用簡單句的基本句型，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息，表述準(zhǔn)確。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，條理清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞用了過去式，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動詞過去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等?！眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛好，習(xí)慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇