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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。s helpful to people39。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語,為文章增色不少,.如: It39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。寫作時,考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點:首先,闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點;其次,列舉共享單車帶來的問題;最后,根據(jù)問題給出個人建議。請根據(jù)表格提示,寫一篇題為“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文,介紹九年級的學(xué)校生活,并提出希望和建議。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如at school,work hard,most of,patient enough,help sb. with sth.,all kinds of problems,in our life,as a result,as for students,listen to,be busy doing,try to do,spend a lot of time doing,not any more,play basketball等。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。2在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。一例)。2在表格中有非常詳細的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容,我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達出來。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。同時注意表達的準確性,尤其是表格中的第五項和第六項內(nèi)容。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整,包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容,沒有遺漏要點。寫作時注意了條理性,使文章具有層次感,條理清楚。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。請以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文,向校報的英語園地投稿。2. 語言流暢,字跡清楚。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示,審題可知,短文應(yīng)包括兩個部分的內(nèi)容:首先介紹這個激勵過你的人是誰,他是怎樣的一個人;然后介紹他是如何激勵你的。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述,人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱,注意謂語動詞形式的變化。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同,不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯??梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主,輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點:首先文章內(nèi)容完整,層次清晰,短文分三段,第一段先介紹了這個人是誰,第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質(zhì)以及對自己的應(yīng)選;最后一段結(jié)尾。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài),文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述,主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,動詞形式變化準確,注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化,語法規(guī)范。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語,如But the person who inspired me m