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d confident .i believe i can be great value to your pany. i’m free any time for an interview. i hope to see you soon. yours sincerely, zhang wu 這是一名大專畢業(yè)生請我修正的一封求職信。在上面提及的七個語步中只能找到7 的內(nèi)容。如此的求職信不會給招聘者留下任何印象。因而這是一封失敗的求職信。 b dear sir, my qualification as described below seem to fit me for the position of secretary(1) that you advertised in today’s newspaper. graduating from sichuan university, working experience as secretary(2) ,prehensive problemsolving skills in a dynamic environment, and excellent oral and written munication skills is the background i would bring to the new position. my history includes(3) *graduati