【正文】 on, some factors play a primary role in es ’s an old saying in Chinese: once bitten, twice , never lie to your they find out you’re lying or cheating, the existing trust will be broken, it’s always hard to rebuild is the second you always break your promise, you will not be trusted by others any important aspect is with good attitude are always show their good manners, patience, modesty, willingness to municate and, most important of all, sincerity to others, which contributes greatly to eliminating apathy and are, still, other influential , from my perspective, honesty, promisekeeping and good attitude stand out among and more：越來(lái)越多= is / are(increasing, getting increasingly, growing)：認(rèn)為=(acknowledge, hold the, consider)that my opinion：以我看來(lái)= as for me, from my part, from my own perspective：流行的= is / are(prevailing, prevalent)：但是= however, although, on the contrary, nevertheless: 因?yàn)? for, result from, due to, caused by, on account of：提高= enhance, promote, boost, soar：完成= plete, fulfill, acplish, achieve：快地=quickly, rapidly, in a fast speed：重要的=vital, significant, critical, crucial第二篇：英語(yǔ)六級(jí)高分作文閃光點(diǎn)作文寫完檢查集中點(diǎn)；；；。所以在寫作時(shí)需要強(qiáng)調(diào)抵制誘惑對(duì)于保持或者培養(yǎng)良好習(xí)慣的重要性，以這一論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行展開(kāi)闡述，注意行文的邏輯性和語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確、流暢。第一篇：2013年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文高分版2013年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文高分版Keep Our Hearts StrongAs the proverb goes, constant drops wear out the habits help pave our way to , during the cultivation of good habits we are frequently bewildered and baffled by temptations from the world around when we are alert and determined enough to resist these temptations can we take a right and unswerving road to our daily life, it is essential for us to be healthy lifestyle, which may consist of regular exercise and balanced diet, is what most people are pursuing in contemporary many people cannot resist the coziness of staying in and temptation of tasty but fatty food, thus giving up half way cultivating healthy habits and getting decreasingly addition, our progress in academic performance depends on good must restrain ourselves from endless , distracted and indulged, we can never maintain a good learning habit, let alone achieve academic summary, good habits rely on strong hearts that are not disturbed by persistence and perseverance, we are heading to success.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】：本次作文要求以“Good habits result from resisting temptation.”即“良好的習(xí)慣源自抵制誘惑”，這一諺語(yǔ)為話題發(fā)表議論，在寫作時(shí)需要對(duì)諺語(yǔ)的寓意進(jìn)行闡釋，并且表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法，相比更為常見(jiàn)的話題型和觀點(diǎn)型作文題來(lái)說(shuō)，有一定的難度。首先要求能夠?qū)χV語(yǔ)進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)確的理解，抓住諺語(yǔ)表達(dá)的中心意思，明確的提出觀點(diǎn)，然后圍繞這個(gè)意思進(jìn)行闡述。Say No to TemptationWe are living in a world full of to lack of experience and determined will, many people cannot discriminate right from wrong and make bad example, some students wallow in internet and lose , they abandon their studies and ruin their things are the saying goes, good habits result from resisting us college students, it is particularly important to say no to temptation and form good achieve this, firstly, distinguish between right and away from adverse temptations such as smoking and playing puter , it is necessary to have a longterm program, in other words, a we have a dream, we will be conscious that our time is we could have a strong will to say no to temptations and focus on meaningful last, in face of temptations, encourage yourself and refuse can be given yourself if you successfully resist a , good habits are formed in this by resisting adverse temptations and developing good habits can we achieve happiness and , we would pay a heavy Good habits resultfromresistingtemptationGood habits are a valuable thing and a bridge reaching desirable , good habits include teamwork, optimistic attitude, confidence and so is well known that teamwork always leaves us less meanspirited and more , optimistic attitude and confidence can encourage us to never give up and find silver linings in desperate should we actively cultivate good habits? For one thing, good habits can jump our trains of thought onto correct tracks, in turn, we can bypass the wrong another thing, persisting what we are good at and doing even more of it creates is where developing good habits es a result, we should take some effective steps to cultivate our good instance, we can frequently inform young people that opportunities for errors abound, so we must develop good habits to cope with sum up, we cannot deny it that good habits do carry a positive smile is the shortest distance between two peopleMark Twain once said, “The human race has one really effective weapon, and that is laughter.”A sm