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r roommates.(住在校外,還是和同學(xué)共住)students should be asked to grade their teacher(是否學(xué)生應(yīng)該要求給老師打分)students should take a parttime job in school(是否學(xué)生在校期間應(yīng)該找兼職)2)第一句的第二種寫法:某事引發(fā)人們關(guān)注(不用寫事情的經(jīng)過,用一個詞兒代替事情過程)Recently,the problem of “”has aroused wide concern among the publicCurrently,he phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public(酒后駕駛)Currently,the frequent jobhopping of graduates has aroused wide concern among the public.(跳槽)Currently,the problem of “food safety” has aroused wide concern among the public.(食品安全)3)第一句的第三種寫法:社會現(xiàn)象變成某個“詞”(這種寫法最大的魅力也是,將事件過程壓縮成一個詞?。㏕he newlycoined word/phrase“”may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age.(“”中填進的詞有:nude picture scandal艷照門丑聞; water shortage缺水;online education網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育;fake diplomas假證書;craze for talent shows 選秀狂熱)4)第一句的第四種寫法:社會趨勢(一般都寫在“有越來越多的人干什么去了”這樣的社會現(xiàn)狀)There is a growing tendency nowadays that?graduates in mounting numbers can hardly find an ideal job(就業(yè)難)people in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for volunteer works/ various talent shows(選秀熱)students in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for students leaders selection(競選班干部熱)people in mounting numbers participate in the test for national civil servants.(公務(wù)員熱)undergraduates in growing numbers take the postgraduate entrance examination(考研熱)people in mounting numbers try their luck to buy lottery tickets(買彩票熱)people in mounting numbers use credit card.(信用卡熱)注:people in mounting numbers 都表示“越來越多的人”,切忌寫:more and more people,找死!5)第一句的第五種寫法:某個現(xiàn)象人盡皆知(一般寫比較大的,比較嚴(yán)重的社會問題)No one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that?that goods in mounting numbers are wrapped in flaring boxes or bags(過度包裝問題)that there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who swarm into big cities.(農(nóng)工進城)The economy has been developing at a considerably high speed at the expense of living environment.(經(jīng)濟發(fā)展以犧牲環(huán)境為代價)文章第二句話:(溫馨提示:陳述正反觀點;你只要說,針對某個事情,人們看法存在不一樣就行,不要再第一段就開始具體論述雙方的觀點各是什么?。〥oes anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ?Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to :對立觀點論述段(溫馨提示:文章的第3,4,5,6四句話,都寫在第二段;這是字?jǐn)?shù)最多,內(nèi)容最豐滿的一段,稱為“豬肚”)文章第三句話:(提出正方觀點,比如說他支持什么;總體來說,有兩種表示支持的說法)Some maintain that(表示“認(rèn)為”的單詞,打死都不寫“think”;maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以寫)1)某物是有好處的:something is beneficial to sth.(練習(xí):跳槽對學(xué)生有利)2)某物優(yōu)點缺點:The merits of outweigh its demerits.(練習(xí):用手機的優(yōu)點缺點)文章第四句話:(上句提出了論點,這句就必須要用論據(jù)來證明,論據(jù)可以寫一個,也可若干個;個數(shù)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo))Firstly,?secondly,?last but not least,?.(萬能理由:這個只能在新東方小虹的六級寫作課堂聽啦?。┪恼碌谖寰湓挘?既是正反對立觀點作文,第三句提出正方觀點,那么這句當(dāng)然要提出對立觀點啦!)However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that(反方觀點),1)某物是有壞處:something is detrimental to )某物缺點優(yōu)點: The demerits of outweigh itsmerits.(merits 代替advantages)文章第六句話:(上句提出了論點,這句就必須要用論據(jù)來證明,論據(jù)可以寫一個,也可若干個;個數(shù)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo))For one thing,? for another,?第三段:個人觀點段(文章的第7,8,9句;四六級作文,包括考研作文,都要求寫essay議論文,短評,所以,寫了上述對立觀點的目的,其實就是為了最后提出自己的觀點?。┪恼碌谄呔湓挘篢o my way of thinking,? From my perspective, + 個人觀點句(參見第三、五)文章第八句話:(上句提出了論點,這句就必須