【正文】 ture, you should attach importance to the study of English. But how can you do well in your English studies? Among other things, determination is an important factor in learning English. However, some people tend to neglect this and only hope that luck will help/favor them. 母語干擾性錯誤 ? 結構變態(tài) ? (1)Make our cities greener is important. Plant tress and flowers is the best measure to obtain the goal. ? (2)Our earth is difficult to support so large population. ? (3)People can through the Inter to get information.. ? (4) Another advantage of the bicycle is take up little space to park than the car. ? (5)As we all know that China which is a poor country has the biggest population. 詞義扭曲 (1) The town has only 30 thousand population but its economy has been on the rise in recent years. ? (2) In my opinion, a college student should learn at least five or six thousand English vocabulary. ? (3) I can hardly find a mon point with my deskmate. ? (4) Information is unavoidable in our times, namely, we cannot keep away from it. ? (1) My English base is still very poor. ? My English level is low. ? His health is bad. ? (2) The model of bikes are various and their quality is better. ? (3) Everyone has his shortings. No one is a one percent full man without fault. 表達失誤 文章的過渡手段 To many foreigners, the American word “family” is confusing. Foreigners often hear an American say My family is ing to visit. In this sentence, family means grandparents and perhaps other relatives. However, at other times, the same American might say, I39。論證充分，有說服力，論證手段豐富（舉例、正反）表達思想清楚，語言流暢，詞匯豐富，連貫性好。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。 ? Women in the Modern World Range finders Women are playing an increased important part in society today.… ………………………………………………... With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.…………………… In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been pletely realized.………………………………… ? Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in government also. They lead other people country, and make out plans. There are many scientist slso. They event new things to improve our life. ? With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, women’s position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do. ? In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been pletely realized. We also should realize, women’ likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men bee its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. I’m sure, the liberation of women would be increased. 評語：基本切題。要求切題 ， 能正確表達思想 ， 意義連貫 ，文理通順 ， 無重大語法錯誤 。 六級作文考試要求 ? CET6級考試大綱對作文的要求是：考生在 30分鐘內寫出一篇 120－ 150個單詞的短文 。 要求考生能正確表達思想 ， 意義連貫 ， 無重大語法錯誤 。講座內容 ? 四六級寫作的基本要求 ? 歷年考試真題命題趨勢分析 ? 句子寫作與錯誤分析 ? 常用承接用語 ? 常用句型 ? 段落寫作 ? 文章的組織結構 ? 十句作文法 ? 寫作基本策略 ? 四六級寫作練習題講評 四級作文考試要求 ? CET4級考試大綱對作文的要求是：考生在 30分鐘內寫出一篇 120個單詞的短文 。試卷上可能給出題目 ， 或規(guī)定情景 ， 或要求看圖作文 ， 或給出段首句要求續(xù)寫 ，或給出關鍵詞要求寫成短文 。 寫作的內容包括日常生活和一般常識 。 試卷上可能給出題目 ， 或要求看圖作文 ， 或根據文章寫出摘要或大意 。 寫作的內容包括科技 、 社會 、 文化等方面的一般常識 。但表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。(注：這是老版本，滿分為 15分 ) 5 Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each ther. Also, you can hardly find out that in today’s families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men fortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been pletely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meetings dominated by men. That’s really the problems we should solve immediately. 評語： 切題。用詞準確，僅有個別小錯誤。m going to stay home with my family this weekend. In this case, he is talking about his wife and children. This is a much narrower meaning than the first one. Using family in this way makes a foreigner wonder w