【正文】 d the outline given below. (1997 年 1 月真題 ) 8 1. 如何理解“熟能生巧” 2. 例如，英語學(xué)習(xí) …… 3. 又如 …… It is wellknown to everyone that “Practice makes perfect.” This is selfevident proverb means doing something repeatedly is the only way to bee expert at it. That is to say, practice makes a great difference between inferiority and perfection. Learning a foreign language like English is a case in point. You can take in a lot about it, such as its pronunciation, vocabulary, sentence structures, grammatical rules, idioms and usage, but all these will quickly escape from your memory without practice. So you must practice listening, speaking, reading and writing so as to acquire the language. Other examples can also be found to prove the proverb. Take cooking for example. A good cook can prepare a delicious meal. But you will not be surprised at his performance if you know how much time he has spent practicing it. Through practice, he then bees an expert at cooking. Undoubtedly, practice makes perfect. Only through practice can one be good at doing things. It is practice, so to speak, that leads to perfection. 分析點評： 第一段：如何理解“熟能生巧”開篇點題，緊接著就諺語的含義闡釋。下劃線部分為語法錯誤或用詞錯誤。有較多的嚴(yán)重 語法錯誤，如不完整的句子，時態(tài)錯誤，詞組用錯，單復(fù)數(shù)很亂。） 5 points Computers are popular with students. Students spend much time using puters than before. The station of average numbers of hours a student spends on the puter per week shows it. In 1990, student spend about two hours on the puter. But in 1995, hours increase two. Now in 2020, student spend about 20 hours per week. Student spend much more time on the puter per week in 2020 than in 1990. Computers are used widely ways. And with the development of city, the price of puter is lower than before. Now, Most of students have puter. So they can use puter not only at school but also at home. In spite of student spend much time on the puter. But it isn’t 7 very good. Students have some trouble on the puter. Most of school use puter playing games. It is very bad for student. They need much more knowledge about puter. And they will use puter on their study and their life. 評論：基本切題。最后一段的最后一句很突兀，內(nèi)容不連貫。） 8 points With the development of the society, we are happy to see the number of students use puters is increasing. In 1990, the number of hours a student spends on the puter per week only 2 hours. But in 2020, more and more students use puters for their life and subjects. They can reading, learning, play video games from the puters. The puter also can help them to solve more and more difficulties, save so much time. What is the reason that more and more students use puters? Firstly, our country bee more and more modern, the puter can make a great use of development. Secondly, the size of puter is smaller than before. It’s convenient. And the prices is also cheaper than before. But in some universities, the puters are not permited to the dormitories, so the students have to go to the puter house beside their school when they need do something with the puter. Above all, the puters are more and more convenient to students. 評論：基本切題。） 11 points As the chart shows: from year 1990, the average number of hours a student spends on the puter per week has been sharply increased. In 1990, students only spend less than 2 hours on puter work while they spend almost 20 hours on it per week now. That means puter plays a more important role in our daily life than ever before. Why has puter bee so popular? The reasons depend on many things. Firstly, puter has been greatly improved these years. It can do many works. Secondly, it has bee cheaper and cheaper so that most students can afford it. Thirdly, puters are used in many area, from factory to panies, from hospitals to schools, so we should grasp how to use puters. Also there are many problems for us in using puter. For instance, some students spent too much time on playing pc games that would affect their study. So we should learn not only how to use puter but also how to use it properly. 評論：整體上該考生的作文是切題的，思想表達清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語法錯誤和用詞錯誤，如 from year 1990, many works, grasp 等?；旧蠠o語法錯誤，僅有個別小錯誤。思想表達清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好。 第四段是總結(jié)段，對上文進行總結(jié)。 However 是過渡詞。但是 contact 用錯了， contact 用作動詞時是及物動詞，直接帶賓語，而不能跟 with, 作名詞時才跟 with。接下來考生列舉了三個理由 (First, … . Also, … . Besides, … .)對主題句進行說明，分析產(chǎn)生這一圖表結(jié)論的原因。 第二段的第一句話是承上啟下句。該考生對圖表的描述準(zhǔn)確又精練，并不拖泥帶水。 and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours, and in 2020, the number soared to 20 hours. Obviously puters are being more and more popular. There are several reasons for this. First, puters facilitate us in more aspects of life. Also, the fast development of the Inter enlarges our demands for using puters. We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Inter. Besides, the prices of puters are getting lower and lower, which enables more students to purchase them. However, there still exist some problems, such as, poor quality, outof date designs and so on. And how to balance the time between using puters and studying is also a serious problem. Anyway, we will benefit a lot from puters as long as we use them properly. 5 分析： 第一段的第一句話是引言句，第二句話是主題句，綜述全圖表的中心信息，也就是考生在審閱圖表后形成的結(jié)論。 2. 作文分為 0分，總分若高于 60分，報分時一律作為 59分不及格處理；若低于 60分，報分時一律再減 6分； 3. 作文分大于 0 分，小于 6 分，則按下式計算成績： 例（ 1）原計算總分為 63 分，實得作文分為 2 分，最后報分： 636+2=59分 例（ 2）原計算總分為 80 分，實得作文分為 4 分，最后報分： 636+4=78分 例（ 3）原計算總分為 55 分，實得作文分為 3 分，最后報分： 556+3=52分 六、四 級考試作文樣文分析 第一節(jié) 四級考試作文樣文及點評 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a position on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your position in the chart and the outline given below. (2020 年 6 月真題 ) 1. 上圖所示為 1990 年、 1995 年、 2020 年某校大學(xué)生使用計算機的情況，請描述其變化； 2. 請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因（可從計算機的用途