【正文】 eated）1. ...2. ...注意：1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展。5．人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見(jiàn)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。要求：1. 意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。每年統(tǒng)計(jì)兩次鳥(niǎo)兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥(niǎo)兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。基本情況張陽(yáng)，陽(yáng)光中學(xué)九年級(jí)二班學(xué)生興趣愛(ài)好1. 喜歡閱讀。此處ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，向我的英國(guó)朋友Peppa寫(xiě)信，介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行的討論情況。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)封回信，簡(jiǎn)單介紹以下討論結(jié)果：1．節(jié)水節(jié)電． 2．垃圾分類 3．少用紙巾，重拾手帕4．步行、騎自行車或公交出行、參考詞匯：low carbon低碳；tissue紙巾詞數(shù)：100詞左右。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！敬鸢浮縈y junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get