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.(河北中考模擬)請以“Never Give Up”為題,寫一篇短文,簡要描述圖中的三個畫面,并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?要求:1. 文中不得涉及真實的人名,校名和地名?2. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫,通順?3. 詞數(shù):80個詞左右,已給出的部分不計入總詞數(shù)?提示詞:the long distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practiceNever Give UpThe . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Never Give Up The . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do longdistance running. After school they run on the playground together. They pete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result. Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the . exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文,題目中有三張圖片,展示了九年級的學(xué)生們在為體育測試做準(zhǔn)備,我們應(yīng)根據(jù)圖片,以Never give up為題,寫一篇文章,簡要描述三個畫面,并談一談自己的想法。文章可以分兩段,第一段介紹圖片內(nèi)容,第二段談?wù)撟约旱南敕āMㄟ^分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時,根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要確定應(yīng)使用的時態(tài)??梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主,穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句,調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏,提升文章檔次。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想,升華了文章的主題。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主,正確使用了謂語動詞的形式。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語,如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。靖江市第三中學(xué)中考模擬) 年11月15日泰州市召開了深化全國文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會,會上我市正式啟動了“泰有禮”全民主題實踐活動,形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識,同時組織“泰有禮”志愿服務(wù)隊伍,圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網(wǎng)”等文明實踐活動,承擔(dān)起對市民日常行為進(jìn)行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 要求:,字跡工整:可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;、校名、地名成其他真實信息;As a member of the city, I think we should______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。Don39。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文,表達(dá)每個人都出一份力,我們的城市會越來越美?!军c睛】3.(下面請大家談?wù)勯喿x的好處并在生活中養(yǎng)成良好的閱讀習(xí)慣。文章的時態(tài)以寫作時為主。開篇點題,分析讀書的好處。4.()當(dāng)昨日重現(xiàn)之時,在腦海里的都是回憶。請選取一個方面,結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。)The following is for reference only(以下表達(dá)僅供參考)used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】:該題目屬于記敘文寫作。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。:短語:full of;in public;again and again;all the time;encourage sb to do sth;do one’s be